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Comment from Patty Palmer
So few words with such a huge meaning. Even more so with Easter just around the corner in two days. This poem could stand to be read or heard not at just this time of the year, but every day. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
So few words with such a huge meaning. Even more so with Easter just around the corner in two days. This poem could stand to be read or heard not at just this time of the year, but every day. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Patty
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your eight syllables in this powerful poetic statement about a dramatic change that would change the world. Turning to God--so needed!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
You have made effective use of your eight syllables in this powerful poetic statement about a dramatic change that would change the world. Turning to God--so needed!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Janice
Comment from Mia Twysted
A simple call to people to drop and pray. Sometimes you have to put trust out there into the world if you ever expect to get any back.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
A simple call to people to drop and pray. Sometimes you have to put trust out there into the world if you ever expect to get any back.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Mia
Comment from Wendy G
A simple challenge for all of us, and a call to unity and prayer is timely and appropriate. The image is excellent. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
A simple challenge for all of us, and a call to unity and prayer is timely and appropriate. The image is excellent. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Wendy
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very good entry for the 1-6-1 prompt. I love that the theme is interesting and the presentation/ art that you chose such a good enhancement for this verse. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
This is a very good entry for the 1-6-1 prompt. I love that the theme is interesting and the presentation/ art that you chose such a good enhancement for this verse. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Melissa.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun filled and uplifting 1-6-1 as we humble ourselves in prayer and you brought the action to life here in your few words that spoke volumes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
A fun filled and uplifting 1-6-1 as we humble ourselves in prayer and you brought the action to life here in your few words that spoke volumes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and rhyme are good.
-A good choice of topic,
and a positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and rhyme are good.
-A good choice of topic,
and a positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Pam
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written 1-6-1 spiritual poem. Hey let's hit our knees today. Pray. Nice overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
This is a Nicely written 1-6-1 spiritual poem. Hey let's hit our knees today. Pray. Nice overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Joanne.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A succinct 1-6-1 poem, with a catchy title and clear directive. The bright yellow background grabs the reader's attention. Thanks for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
A succinct 1-6-1 poem, with a catchy title and clear directive. The bright yellow background grabs the reader's attention. Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Sharon
Comment from Susan Larson
Excellent message and excellent rhyming pattern. Very nice silhouette of prayer and the yellow background is really attention getting. Wishing you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
Excellent message and excellent rhyming pattern. Very nice silhouette of prayer and the yellow background is really attention getting. Wishing you well in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Susan