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Comment from AnnaLinda
Hey Poet,
Very excellent suggestion you've sent out in your 1-6-1 entry poem!
Three rhymes in there too! Fantabulous! A very clever approach to the prompt and great presentation in yellow and black.
A winner!
Anna
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hey Poet,
Very excellent suggestion you've sent out in your 1-6-1 entry poem!
Three rhymes in there too! Fantabulous! A very clever approach to the prompt and great presentation in yellow and black.
A winner!
Anna
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Anna
Comment from PENofFIRE
Great entry for this contest. So much said in so few words. I put my own interpretation on the artwork. It reminds me of a stop sign which in my opinion perfect for this piece. I'm reading 'Hey, Stop, Pray.' l Love the whole thing. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Great entry for this contest. So much said in so few words. I put my own interpretation on the artwork. It reminds me of a stop sign which in my opinion perfect for this piece. I'm reading 'Hey, Stop, Pray.' l Love the whole thing. Best wishes.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Pen, for th3 great review.
Comment from eliz100
Great message in a few words. When you use so few words each word has to pack a punch and yours definitely meets that criteria. I like your use of yellow which is a positive addition.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Great message in a few words. When you use so few words each word has to pack a punch and yours definitely meets that criteria. I like your use of yellow which is a positive addition.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Eliz100.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Not only is this a great idea and good suggestion but it's a well-composed post and a good-looking presentation. The colors are bright and cheerful and the image you're chosen is a good match.
If I may make one tiny suggestion - I would like to recommend that you darken your text color. I realize that you have chosen 'black', but if you go with the default black color, it's really more of a really dark gray and you won't get as much contrast as you might like.
IF you are creating this in Advanced Editor -
1.) click on: 'edit this'
2.) On the FAR right side of the toolbar above the text box where you write in (or paste) your work, you'll see two capital 'A's: one has a line under it and one's in a black box. [Forgive me if you already know this - but I want to be certain.]
--> click on the A with the line under it
3.) Underneath all the rows of colors, you'll see the words 'more colors'
--> click on 'more colors'
4.) A new box will come up in the middle of your screen. Please notice the line of colors in the VERY BOTTOM ROW - they are blacks - to grays - to whites (with darkest blacks starting on the left fading to white on the right.)
--> click on the VERY DARKEST BLACK - which is the bottom left corner.
5.) You should see that dark black color appear to the right in a box that says 'selected color'. If that's the right one, click 'OK'.
Might sound like a lot of work and many steps, but it's a simple, simple thing. Give it a try - you may be surprised at the difference it will make in your text color.
Of course, you can also simply ignore me as a crackpot. *smile*
You still have a lovely entry and should do well in the contest. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Not only is this a great idea and good suggestion but it's a well-composed post and a good-looking presentation. The colors are bright and cheerful and the image you're chosen is a good match.
If I may make one tiny suggestion - I would like to recommend that you darken your text color. I realize that you have chosen 'black', but if you go with the default black color, it's really more of a really dark gray and you won't get as much contrast as you might like.
IF you are creating this in Advanced Editor -
1.) click on: 'edit this'
2.) On the FAR right side of the toolbar above the text box where you write in (or paste) your work, you'll see two capital 'A's: one has a line under it and one's in a black box. [Forgive me if you already know this - but I want to be certain.]
--> click on the A with the line under it
3.) Underneath all the rows of colors, you'll see the words 'more colors'
--> click on 'more colors'
4.) A new box will come up in the middle of your screen. Please notice the line of colors in the VERY BOTTOM ROW - they are blacks - to grays - to whites (with darkest blacks starting on the left fading to white on the right.)
--> click on the VERY DARKEST BLACK - which is the bottom left corner.
5.) You should see that dark black color appear to the right in a box that says 'selected color'. If that's the right one, click 'OK'.
Might sound like a lot of work and many steps, but it's a simple, simple thing. Give it a try - you may be surprised at the difference it will make in your text color.
Of course, you can also simply ignore me as a crackpot. *smile*
You still have a lovely entry and should do well in the contest. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Robyn. I will blacken the black to the depth of blackness that the science of text color will allow.
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The reader's cornea will appreciate the darkness of the blackness of the fontness. You are funness.
Comment from lancellot
This meets all the requirements and makes a clear statement. This is just my opinion but I think you would attract more readers and possibly more voters if you changed this from General poetry to spiritual poetry, since it deals with praying.
Good entry.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This meets all the requirements and makes a clear statement. This is just my opinion but I think you would attract more readers and possibly more voters if you changed this from General poetry to spiritual poetry, since it deals with praying.
Good entry.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Lance. Good idea.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Only the prayer can help us keeping the sanity in check, so your call for prayers it's echoing through our not so normal life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and with the contest.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Only the prayer can help us keeping the sanity in check, so your call for prayers it's echoing through our not so normal life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and with the contest.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Iza
