Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

Truer words would be hard to find. These three are proven witches that have cast evil spells on unsuspecting people. This is really terrifying. Nancy rants, Kamala laughs, AOC tries to convince people she has a brain.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. I hope you're having a lovely weekend. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Excellent work here! I agree 100%! Biden is not in control. I don't understand how people don't see it! And you have rhymed! Get ut girl! Nice work!!!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

This is awesome. Thank you wonderful fellow writer for this amazing review. :)

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Good

I don't understand why people are so terrified of these three women. There are so many checks and balances in our government, not to mention things like Republican filibusters/redistricting attempts. I don't know, these ladies just don't seem that scary to me.

Anyway, I hope you have a nice Easter weekend.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

They are part of a movement to eliminate those checks and balances you speak of. They are currently trying to get rid of the filibuster and are working to change the requirements for voting, that would allow people to vote without an I D. There is a lot to worry about. Anyway, thanks for reading and have a happy Easter. :)

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

You've hit the nail on the head. I'm glad that you aren't afraid to make your feelings known. I backed off of this particular contest because I don't want to get involved in politics on this site, but believe me when I say, you aren't alone in your feelings. You even managed to rhyme. Well done.

Tom

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thank you for this great review. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. :)

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is fantastic.
The context, concept right through to the form (I am a sucker for rhymes that transcend reason). I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thank you for this great review, I appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

So much said in just a few words. No matter what your political affiliation I think we can all agree that politicians are crooked and only care about their bottom line. Exceptionally written and worthy of six stars

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, I am so glad you feel this way. I appreciate the review. :)

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

I happen to agree with your philosophy. You made the syllable count required by the contest. the pictures dominate the poem just as your words report. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, and that you agree. Have a good weekend. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I agree, Mystery Writer. Your image plus well-chosen words says it all. I've believed this from the start.

I believe the word mirage is only two syllables, so that line needs one more syllable. You could spell out the 'is' from the contraction.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Fixed it! Thanks for helping me and for reading my poem. :)