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Comment from LKG Alexander
That was a special story with the outcome of kindness for things that are different - that is a message that can't be told enough to children. Thank you for sharing !
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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That was a special story with the outcome of kindness for things that are different - that is a message that can't be told enough to children. Thank you for sharing !
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is good, I think some of the end rhymes are near- rhymes and could be reworded. The theme is good for kids, it is sort of Rudolph and special people theme.
Those are popular today.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hmm, this is good, I think some of the end rhymes are near- rhymes and could be reworded. The theme is good for kids, it is sort of Rudolph and special people theme.
Those are popular today.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your observations and review.
