Star Struck
We have all been star struck at one time.15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Ah, I am sure he will have a wonderful girl soon! (Hope so - my grandson looks just like this boy, and has the sweetest nature!!) You have captured his feelings perfectly, both with the image and the words. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Ah, I am sure he will have a wonderful girl soon! (Hope so - my grandson looks just like this boy, and has the sweetest nature!!) You have captured his feelings perfectly, both with the image and the words. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Wendy, for your kind praise of my shortie.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork for your story.
-You told it well, not giving anything
away about who Hildy is.
-Good description in the opening
paragraph and a good hook.
-A good follow up paragraph.
-Good luck in the contest.
-I don't know if you could
manage it, but a short "aha" moment
at the end would create even more interest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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-Great artwork for your story.
-You told it well, not giving anything
away about who Hildy is.
-Good description in the opening
paragraph and a good hook.
-A good follow up paragraph.
-Good luck in the contest.
-I don't know if you could
manage it, but a short "aha" moment
at the end would create even more interest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Hi Pam. Thank you so much for your very astute observations about my shortie and your suggestion. Wish I could add an "aha: moment but that 60-word limit allows for little leeway.
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You are quite welcome, it was just a thought.
Comment from Begin Again
The one faithful and forever loyal love you can count on every day and night that you share with them... our adorable furbabies. Smiles to you - Carol
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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The one faithful and forever loyal love you can count on every day and night that you share with them... our adorable furbabies. Smiles to you - Carol
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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You are so correct. Our dogs seem to love us no matter what. Many thanks for sharing my shortie.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Awww, this is super cute. What a great concept for this little 60 word dash writing prompt. Good luck in the contest. I feel like this is a strong contender.
Have a great Sunday!
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Awww, this is super cute. What a great concept for this little 60 word dash writing prompt. Good luck in the contest. I feel like this is a strong contender.
Have a great Sunday!
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Erika, for your very kind praise of my shortie. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Leann DS
Haha! I was not expecting her to be a dog. Good flash fiction with a surprising and humorous ending. Well done Creating a complete story with less than 60 words. Hugs and blessings to you.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Haha! I was not expecting her to be a dog. Good flash fiction with a surprising and humorous ending. Well done Creating a complete story with less than 60 words. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Leann. I?m glad you enjoyed my shortie.
