What We Created VS. Man
A cautionary tale10 total reviews
Comment from leather
I believe you put a lot of work into this piece--10 stanzas. It is a thought-provoking subject in the AI field that is advancing rapidly. Our imaginations may not be ae to keep up with reality. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I believe you put a lot of work into this piece--10 stanzas. It is a thought-provoking subject in the AI field that is advancing rapidly. Our imaginations may not be ae to keep up with reality. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this great review. I heard on the TV about a engineer who claims that robots have emotions and thier own ideas....interesting. Thanks for reading. :)
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Scary, too.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great response to the prompt. I enjoyed reading every single word. It could easily happen. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This was a great response to the prompt. I enjoyed reading every single word. It could easily happen. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your great comments. :)
Comment from papa55mike
An interesting thought on the Robot story. I'm reading the last in the Robot Chronicles by Asimov. Your poem took a Terminator approach. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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An interesting thought on the Robot story. I'm reading the last in the Robot Chronicles by Asimov. Your poem took a Terminator approach. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. I'll have to check out those chronicles, I'm fascinated by robots..:)
Comment from Wendy G
A cleverly written poem, although the rhythm and metre is not perfect. Yet it is a good read, and very interesting - what man can do with Augmented Intelligence now that he has created it - or will it win in the end, to our own destruction? Thought-provoking. Well done and good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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A cleverly written poem, although the rhythm and metre is not perfect. Yet it is a good read, and very interesting - what man can do with Augmented Intelligence now that he has created it - or will it win in the end, to our own destruction? Thought-provoking. Well done and good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this very thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think this will become a reality eventually and robots will rule the word, we may regret their invention as time goes by, we will see, I would love to glimpse the future, a fine write and food for thought here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I think this will become a reality eventually and robots will rule the word, we may regret their invention as time goes by, we will see, I would love to glimpse the future, a fine write and food for thought here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you, as always I appreciate your insight. :)
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. I am impressed that you answered this prompt in a poem. You have done everything I usually recommend for a competition piece: changed the background color, font size, added an illustration, etc. This poem should be a strong contender. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for sharing. I am impressed that you answered this prompt in a poem. You have done everything I usually recommend for a competition piece: changed the background color, font size, added an illustration, etc. This poem should be a strong contender. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. Poetry is my favorite, I don't do so well writing stories. Thank you for reading. :)
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You're welcome!
Comment from AprilViolet
Love how this poem told a whole story. It was engaging the whole way through from beginning to end. I hope that doesn't happen in the future but who knows? Maybe its already happened and we don't know.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Love how this poem told a whole story. It was engaging the whole way through from beginning to end. I hope that doesn't happen in the future but who knows? Maybe its already happened and we don't know.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a really epic poem! I love the build up! It flows very well and I'm so glad the humans won! I hate robots! I would be very surprised if this didn't win
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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This is a really epic poem! I love the build up! It flows very well and I'm so glad the humans won! I hate robots! I would be very surprised if this didn't win
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this amazing review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Robots versus humans certainly raise some interesting points. While I am very intrigued by the whole concept of Artificial Intelligence, I have always been concerned about how far was too far. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Robots versus humans certainly raise some interesting points. While I am very intrigued by the whole concept of Artificial Intelligence, I have always been concerned about how far was too far. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
This is perfectly written and speaks to a terrifying, legitimate possibility. We are moving way too fast for comfort. Someone will have to work hard to beat this one.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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This is perfectly written and speaks to a terrifying, legitimate possibility. We are moving way too fast for comfort. Someone will have to work hard to beat this one.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. Your opinion always means a lot to me. :)
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Thank you. I am honored.
