Take The Air
Stop a while ... rest your soul7 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written three line poem. It has a great rhyme also. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Great overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
This is a nicely written three line poem. It has a great rhyme also. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Great overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and rating : )
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Finding peace can sometimes take a great effort on our part as we need to let go of our anxious thoughts, I think there was success here with your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
Finding peace can sometimes take a great effort on our part as we need to let go of our anxious thoughts, I think there was success here with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and rating : )
Comment from Mazipoodles
Your poem, illustration and presentation work very well together as a complete composition. I enjoyed reading your well written and reflective piece.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
Your poem, illustration and presentation work very well together as a complete composition. I enjoyed reading your well written and reflective piece.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and rating : )
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. Your image and color scheme work well with your chosen words and the rhymes are an added bonus. You give readers much to think about. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
I enjoyed your contest entry. Your image and color scheme work well with your chosen words and the rhymes are an added bonus. You give readers much to think about. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and rating : )
Comment from Sharon Davis
This three line poem conveys a succinct, yet important message- relax, breathe deeply, take in the air. Lovely artwork compliments the theme of the poem.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
This three line poem conveys a succinct, yet important message- relax, breathe deeply, take in the air. Lovely artwork compliments the theme of the poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and rating. Much appreciated : )
Comment from Sharon Davis
This three line poem conveys a succinct, yet important message- relax, breathe deeply, take in the air. Lovely artwork compliments the theme of the poem.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
This three line poem conveys a succinct, yet important message- relax, breathe deeply, take in the air. Lovely artwork compliments the theme of the poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you : )
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Yes breathe... I love that assurance of a deep breath of fresh air clearing our minds; allowing peace to enter our soul. Perfect illustration to support this. Great work!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
Yes breathe... I love that assurance of a deep breath of fresh air clearing our minds; allowing peace to enter our soul. Perfect illustration to support this. Great work!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and rating. Much appreciated : )