NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "13. Home"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The grandness of a home depends on the love within it and the heart that beats inside it. It sounds like your home is very grand indeed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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The grandness of a home depends on the love within it and the heart that beats inside it. It sounds like your home is very grand indeed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Hi Dolly :) 'Tis grand indeed! Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a simple heartwarming poem that fits the requirements of a Rispetto poetry format and does it well. It is quaint and the author sounds like they've got the perfect home, which is a dream for a lot of us who must live in HUD apartment housing projects. Yet, I am grateful for, my one-bedroom apartment, on the fifth floor, facing the beautiful sunrise each morning and the sunset each night.
Well done and an excellent tribute to home sweet home.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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This is a simple heartwarming poem that fits the requirements of a Rispetto poetry format and does it well. It is quaint and the author sounds like they've got the perfect home, which is a dream for a lot of us who must live in HUD apartment housing projects. Yet, I am grateful for, my one-bedroom apartment, on the fifth floor, facing the beautiful sunrise each morning and the sunset each night.
Well done and an excellent tribute to home sweet home.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Jesse, for your feedback.
Sending you my best wishes, Debra :)
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Best wishes to you as well.
Jesse
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your POV about your home, Debra. Good job with the rispetto. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. Your picture choice is a good pairing, too. You give good advice about your home that could be applied to many others as well.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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I like your POV about your home, Debra. Good job with the rispetto. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. Your picture choice is a good pairing, too. You give good advice about your home that could be applied to many others as well.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jan, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes, you have written your rispetto beautifully. And this Home Sweet Home should be cross-stitched and displayed on the wall, of all those things that make us happiest about our home.
So inventive, and true.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Yes, you have written your rispetto beautifully. And this Home Sweet Home should be cross-stitched and displayed on the wall, of all those things that make us happiest about our home.
So inventive, and true.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Gloria, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely rispetto because it speaks to me about contentment. And if one is content with love of family at home, it is truly a beautiful thing and gives us all we need to deal with things outside of the home.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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This is a lovely rispetto because it speaks to me about contentment. And if one is content with love of family at home, it is truly a beautiful thing and gives us all we need to deal with things outside of the home.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Helen, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Home
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Lovely Rispetto for the NaPoWriMo 2021challenge. It sounds great rhyme sound.
It's true, a cozy home filled with love is priceless. You are doing well with your challenge. Keep up the good work.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Home
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Lovely Rispetto for the NaPoWriMo 2021challenge. It sounds great rhyme sound.
It's true, a cozy home filled with love is priceless. You are doing well with your challenge. Keep up the good work.
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
"My home-sweet-home ain't all that grand,
nor half as pretty as I'd planned,
but home is where I'm happiest
with all the people I love best."
Well said. The people inside who love one another is what makes a home, not the building or the material things.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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"My home-sweet-home ain't all that grand,
nor half as pretty as I'd planned,
but home is where I'm happiest
with all the people I love best."
Well said. The people inside who love one another is what makes a home, not the building or the material things.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Anne, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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You are welcome, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
I agree, home is grand when it's filled with love. I love your sweet poem and chosen art. Sublime.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for your writing endeavors,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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I agree, home is grand when it's filled with love. I love your sweet poem and chosen art. Sublime.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for your writing endeavors,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Sal, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Jo Elle
Simple, sweet thoughts here, as sweet as the home they were born in.
Perfect rhyme and meter too.
Congratulations on doing NaPoWriMo!
(I have been too lazy this year to even try.)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Simple, sweet thoughts here, as sweet as the home they were born in.
Perfect rhyme and meter too.
Congratulations on doing NaPoWriMo!
(I have been too lazy this year to even try.)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jo Elle, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wonderful poem about your home. I like the words, My home-sweet-home ain't all that grand, nor half as pretty as I'd planned, but home is where I'm happiest with all the people I love best. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Wonderful poem about your home. I like the words, My home-sweet-home ain't all that grand, nor half as pretty as I'd planned, but home is where I'm happiest with all the people I love best. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
