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Passionate

Passion poem

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Comment from lyenochka
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I like your strong opening line "Driven to love." And what better drive is there than the Lord's Passion - His Sacrifice for us should drive us to love one another. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from T B Botts
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This is a great poem. How people can take a few lines and say so much is a mystery to me. When you have to fit those lines into a particular style, it becomes even more mysterious. You nailed it. Well done.

Tom

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you!