Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "Don Pops The Question"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Sankey
This was good. I am glad I picked it up this morning. Looks like the next was emptying some more. You have left us hanging for the next chapter which is a good thing. No spags!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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This was good. I am glad I picked it up this morning. Looks like the next was emptying some more. You have left us hanging for the next chapter which is a good thing. No spags!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you. It was only posted an hour or so ago. I'm glad you didn't find any spags. I appreciate the review.
Beth
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NEST sorry.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Beth, I don't know what will prove to be the most exciting disaster. Don's finally proposing to Kimberly, OR what will happen at the rehearsal dinner that's coming up in the next chapter. Please post soon.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Dear Beth, I don't know what will prove to be the most exciting disaster. Don's finally proposing to Kimberly, OR what will happen at the rehearsal dinner that's coming up in the next chapter. Please post soon.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you Suzanne. I'll let you decide when you read the next post. I appreciate you continuing to stick with my stories.
Comment from royowen
I love reading about the kids growing up, Don reminds me of my Elder daughter's hubby , when Nick proposed he hired a limousine, and toured the local wine district he was an impoverished student at the time, but he's got a great job now and is very generous, he can't do things in half measures. Rock Hudson was gay also, but he died of aids. But it works out in the end. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Lightening) lightning. One lightens a load, but gets struck by lightning.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I love reading about the kids growing up, Don reminds me of my Elder daughter's hubby , when Nick proposed he hired a limousine, and toured the local wine district he was an impoverished student at the time, but he's got a great job now and is very generous, he can't do things in half measures. Rock Hudson was gay also, but he died of aids. But it works out in the end. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Lightening) lightning. One lightens a load, but gets struck by lightning.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the review and comments and for pointing my misspelling. I fixed it thanks to you.
Beth
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Full speed ahead. Your family never stops, like the battery that goes on and on. All in good stead though. They certainly are connecting with each other nicely. The line that Don came up with is ste
"Your life will change forever, when you get to the top."
For sure. The cat thing...you should have sent them to a vet.
LOL Ralf
I was at () critical point on a job,>> missing word 'a'
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Full speed ahead. Your family never stops, like the battery that goes on and on. All in good stead though. They certainly are connecting with each other nicely. The line that Don came up with is ste
"Your life will change forever, when you get to the top."
For sure. The cat thing...you should have sent them to a vet.
LOL Ralf
I was at () critical point on a job,>> missing word 'a'
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you Ralf. I appreciate the stars and comments. I did learn to never try dipping a cat.
Beth
Comment from Ben Colder
Well Christy, Rock Hudson was queer as a 7 dollar bill. The women adored him.
but Don had gone too far to back down now. Soaking wet and shivering from the cold, Don got down on one knee and proposed.
Well done Don.
Good one Beth.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Well Christy, Rock Hudson was queer as a 7 dollar bill. The women adored him.
but Don had gone too far to back down now. Soaking wet and shivering from the cold, Don got down on one knee and proposed.
Well done Don.
Good one Beth.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you Chuck. I'm glad you still reviewing and writing. I'm looking forward to more of your story and I'm pleased you are still reading mine.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wedding can be a real mess. I am glad I had boys and they were still a mess. LOL I did enjoy every one of them. Only one more to go, if he ever gets married. LOL I do enjoy reading.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Wedding can be a real mess. I am glad I had boys and they were still a mess. LOL I did enjoy every one of them. Only one more to go, if he ever gets married. LOL I do enjoy reading.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you again. I gone through four wedding with my children and another is planned for October. Unfortunately they have not all lasted. I only have four children and one of them has never been married.
Beth
Comment from RetroStarfish
I really enjoyed reading this chapter of your family's story and laughed out loud in a couple of places - notably when you tried to submerge your cats! And, you've ended with a cliff hanger. I can't wait to read what happens at the rehearsal dinner.
One small typo in the section where Don and Kimberly are trying to outrun the storm:
"...toward a lower lever." [level]
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this chapter of your family's story and laughed out loud in a couple of places - notably when you tried to submerge your cats! And, you've ended with a cliff hanger. I can't wait to read what happens at the rehearsal dinner.
One small typo in the section where Don and Kimberly are trying to outrun the storm:
"...toward a lower lever." [level]
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I glad you pointed out the spag. I've fixed it. Unfortunately, the year has some further surprises
Beth
Comment from Judy Lawless
Poor Don. He tried to do something romantic for the proposal, but mother nature had other ideas. At least she liked the ring. You had another busy time. I've had my experiences trying to bathe cats. I can feel your pain.
And now you've left us with a mystery! Well done.
Only one small thing: "but Don told (her) she
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Poor Don. He tried to do something romantic for the proposal, but mother nature had other ideas. At least she liked the ring. You had another busy time. I've had my experiences trying to bathe cats. I can feel your pain.
And now you've left us with a mystery! Well done.
Only one small thing: "but Don told (her) she
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and for the comments. I appreciate you pointing out the error. I've fixed it.
Beth
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Yes, I know the purpose of this mock writing, this biographical non-fiction or essay speaks expressively in a structured order how another tragedy was to happen in your family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Yes, I know the purpose of this mock writing, this biographical non-fiction or essay speaks expressively in a structured order how another tragedy was to happen in your family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reviewing this story in my biographical book. I appreciate the comments.
Beth
