Remembering Yesterday
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Here are two typos:
The Wdding would tkae place as planned.
What an eventful wedding. Even broke his hip just before the wedding. But you did fight though it and arrived at the other end sucessfully.
I'm glad you are writing this down.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Here are two typos:
The Wdding would tkae place as planned.
What an eventful wedding. Even broke his hip just before the wedding. But you did fight though it and arrived at the other end sucessfully.
I'm glad you are writing this down.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the review and comments. We don't do big events well. Something sees to always go wrong. I was able to deal with the guests but the accident was out of control.
Beth
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
"Shelby" should be a dictionary entry; def. =fiasco, snafu. As for Kimberly's mother--TACKY--you said it. I'd too refuse to tell my "guests" how and how much to "pay."
typos:
Traditional=>TRADITIONALLY, this meant the two of them would be the next of THE guests to marry.
Jane and I were told that we must buy [out=>OUR] dresses
than the bridesmaids[APOSTROPHE] dresses.
LAST SENTENCE: The Wdding=>WEDDING would tkae=>TAKE place as planned.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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"Shelby" should be a dictionary entry; def. =fiasco, snafu. As for Kimberly's mother--TACKY--you said it. I'd too refuse to tell my "guests" how and how much to "pay."
typos:
Traditional=>TRADITIONALLY, this meant the two of them would be the next of THE guests to marry.
Jane and I were told that we must buy [out=>OUR] dresses
than the bridesmaids[APOSTROPHE] dresses.
LAST SENTENCE: The Wdding=>WEDDING would tkae=>TAKE place as planned.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the review, comments and help. Everything I added as a second though seemed to have an error in it. I should have left it alone. LOL
Beth
Comment from Judy Lawless
Hi Beth. You sure had the excitement at your place that week! It is too bad that the wedding couldn't have been postponed, but that can be difficult when everything is booked. Great writing.
Here are a few spags: "The traditional good-luck rice was (the) reported to kill the birds." - remove the
"Jane and I were told that we must buy (out) dresses that matched those colors" - remove out
"The Wdding would tkae place as planned." - no explanation needed here. :)
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Hi Beth. You sure had the excitement at your place that week! It is too bad that the wedding couldn't have been postponed, but that can be difficult when everything is booked. Great writing.
Here are a few spags: "The traditional good-luck rice was (the) reported to kill the birds." - remove the
"Jane and I were told that we must buy (out) dresses that matched those colors" - remove out
"The Wdding would tkae place as planned." - no explanation needed here. :)
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you Judy. I appreciate your review and you help with the spags. They were in the sentences I added as an afterthought. I shouldn't add anything after bedtime. LOL
Beth
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I know how you feel!😀
