Heavy Rain
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Boogienights. I enjoyed reading it. Your choice of the animated image is perfect for your well thought out poem. Your lines flow smoothly, the rhymes work, and the imagery is vivid. I like the way you formatted your lines and have the word quiet on a line by itself.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Boogienights. I enjoyed reading it. Your choice of the animated image is perfect for your well thought out poem. Your lines flow smoothly, the rhymes work, and the imagery is vivid. I like the way you formatted your lines and have the word quiet on a line by itself.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, have a nice evening. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Heavy Rain, ends with quiet and fills the rest of the stanzas with the fear and noise of the storm raging through the neighborhood. Intense.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This poem, Heavy Rain, ends with quiet and fills the rest of the stanzas with the fear and noise of the storm raging through the neighborhood. Intense.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The rainy days are best for washing negative thoughts and help you to stay positive forever. After the rain, you see all your place is clean and that place smells good you start feeling the fresh air. I enjoyed your well-written poetry with rhyming words that flow smoothly. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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The rainy days are best for washing negative thoughts and help you to stay positive forever. After the rain, you see all your place is clean and that place smells good you start feeling the fresh air. I enjoyed your well-written poetry with rhyming words that flow smoothly. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
A descriptive and well structured poem that responds to the writing prompt that requires that the piem's final word be quiet. The presentation of the piece and its tone are enhanced by the video style picture of the wind blown trees in the story weather. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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A descriptive and well structured poem that responds to the writing prompt that requires that the piem's final word be quiet. The presentation of the piece and its tone are enhanced by the video style picture of the wind blown trees in the story weather. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this fine review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
"Torrential rains come down to batter, all that's in its path" I wonder if this should read "torrential rain ...all that's in its path..." or, "torrential rains...all that's in their path"? I enjoyed this poem and admire your excellent posts. Thank you so much
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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"Torrential rains come down to batter, all that's in its path" I wonder if this should read "torrential rain ...all that's in its path..." or, "torrential rains...all that's in their path"? I enjoyed this poem and admire your excellent posts. Thank you so much
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words. I'll take another look at that line. :)
Comment from lyenochka
That's a great way to describe the quiet - by contrasting with one of the noisiest sounds we have - a thunderstorm. I loved the line " The kind of rain that Noah knew, when God unleashed his wrath. " Great work on ending with the word "quiet" all by itself at the end to give it more focus.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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That's a great way to describe the quiet - by contrasting with one of the noisiest sounds we have - a thunderstorm. I loved the line " The kind of rain that Noah knew, when God unleashed his wrath. " Great work on ending with the word "quiet" all by itself at the end to give it more focus.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review and your kind words, they are very appreciated. :)
Comment from Leann DS
I really like this poem. The rhyme and rhythm are terrific and it flows easily along. He visual imagery it presents is very clear. Well done! Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I really like this poem. The rhyme and rhythm are terrific and it flows easily along. He visual imagery it presents is very clear. Well done! Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo/video to compliment your poem. Great entry for the quiet prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo/video to compliment your poem. Great entry for the quiet prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you, I really appreciate your opinion. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
It sounds as if this storm was a tornado! Ripping down everything in its sight. The eerie quiet after a storm like that is deafening. Now, time to rejoice and rebuild. Great job on the poem.
Patty
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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It sounds as if this storm was a tornado! Ripping down everything in its sight. The eerie quiet after a storm like that is deafening. Now, time to rejoice and rebuild. Great job on the poem.
Patty
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Severe thunderstorms can also cause a lot of damage. I've never seen a tornado, but have seen downed trees from lightning. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from WriterHeather
You have penned an amazing poem for this contest. It just builds so beautifully. I love how you incorporated the word into this piece. And I absolutely love the gif!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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You have penned an amazing poem for this contest. It just builds so beautifully. I love how you incorporated the word into this piece. And I absolutely love the gif!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's always wonderful to hear from you. :)
