The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Cal and Cris"The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
13 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, the big boys are probably intimidating, but Cris and Cal can sort of sneak up and catch the bad people off guard. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Well, the big boys are probably intimidating, but Cris and Cal can sort of sneak up and catch the bad people off guard. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thanks again, Ric!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
I like the flow of the story. Had a nice action scene. Seemed to have no grammar or punctuation issues. I like how it was written. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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I like the flow of the story. Had a nice action scene. Seemed to have no grammar or punctuation issues. I like how it was written. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Hi, Ashlyn. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A powerhouse! Vivid and graphic, masterful narration and well-developed characters. Go angels!
Gabriel Hope leads a formidable group of Angels and Walkers through the Spirit Realm on a dangerous [TREK] to India.
She hears her stomach growling and searches her backpack for a cereal bar[COMMA for clarity] with no luck.
Or reword: ... searches ... for a cereal bar; no luck.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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A powerhouse! Vivid and graphic, masterful narration and well-developed characters. Go angels!
Gabriel Hope leads a formidable group of Angels and Walkers through the Spirit Realm on a dangerous [TREK] to India.
She hears her stomach growling and searches her backpack for a cereal bar[COMMA for clarity] with no luck.
Or reword: ... searches ... for a cereal bar; no luck.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Hi, Elizabeth. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bill Schott
This episode provides a fun day for the two as they fight crime and rudeness. Seems a bit uneven, I guess, since the harmless rude guy gets his wrist broken and the potential murderer runs off with just a load of crap in his pants.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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This episode provides a fun day for the two as they fight crime and rudeness. Seems a bit uneven, I guess, since the harmless rude guy gets his wrist broken and the potential murderer runs off with just a load of crap in his pants.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Hi, Bill. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, a woman must be respected: ""I should throat punch right now!" Cal hollers. "But that would not be showing you the love of Jesus." She jerks his hand down again. "You need to learn how to respect a woman before something bad happens to you." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Yup, a woman must be respected: ""I should throat punch right now!" Cal hollers. "But that would not be showing you the love of Jesus." She jerks his hand down again. "You need to learn how to respect a woman before something bad happens to you." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi, Iza. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! There's a lot of action packed stuff here. But what I liked best is that these people love the Lord and are in constant communication with Him. I am not keen on violence or gun use but it seems these two are heroes trusting the Lord and doing their part for the world.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Wow! There's a lot of action packed stuff here. But what I liked best is that these people love the Lord and are in constant communication with Him. I am not keen on violence or gun use but it seems these two are heroes trusting the Lord and doing their part for the world.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
This is kind of a fantasy story for those who dream of righting the wrongs of the world. I think you have a couple of good characters here in Cal and Cris, and the attention to detail in the descriptions of the scenes, especially the one where Cris interrupts the robbery and puts his colt 45 against the forehead of the robber in a flash. Very Clint Eastwood. Our hearts are pounding in that moment when everything can go very wrong. One thing I really liked was the prayers of Cal at the beginning when she asks the Lord for answers about the drug addict girl she left behind in San Diego and she gets no answer. It is very realistic. estory
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is kind of a fantasy story for those who dream of righting the wrongs of the world. I think you have a couple of good characters here in Cal and Cris, and the attention to detail in the descriptions of the scenes, especially the one where Cris interrupts the robbery and puts his colt 45 against the forehead of the robber in a flash. Very Clint Eastwood. Our hearts are pounding in that moment when everything can go very wrong. One thing I really liked was the prayers of Cal at the beginning when she asks the Lord for answers about the drug addict girl she left behind in San Diego and she gets no answer. It is very realistic. estory
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
There's a lot of violence going on in the world, and the devil is going around sceaming his head off, but that's nothing compared to one who has faith in God, that comes from knowing Christ as Lord and saviour. Beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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There's a lot of violence going on in the world, and the devil is going around sceaming his head off, but that's nothing compared to one who has faith in God, that comes from knowing Christ as Lord and saviour. Beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You too
Comment from nancy_e_davis
through the Spirit Realm on a dangerous [trip ?] to India.
missing word?
He strides up to the door then notices the cashier's face staring at [him] with a frightened look.
I love it when I see evil over come with good! I love your Gabriel Hope stories, Mike. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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through the Spirit Realm on a dangerous [trip ?] to India.
missing word?
He strides up to the door then notices the cashier's face staring at [him] with a frightened look.
I love it when I see evil over come with good! I love your Gabriel Hope stories, Mike. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi, Nancy. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story. Those six stars are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
These are interesting stories that deal with two people just out to make a difference in the world wherever God may lead them. There is a lot we don't know about their backgrounds but stories shows their actions and something about their character.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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These are interesting stories that deal with two people just out to make a difference in the world wherever God may lead them. There is a lot we don't know about their backgrounds but stories shows their actions and something about their character.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
