Yoda Speaking
May the force be with you3 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on placing in the Star Wars contest. Your Haiku is creative and perfect for the photograph you chose. It looks as though Yoda is actually speaking. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
Congratulations on placing in the Star Wars contest. Your Haiku is creative and perfect for the photograph you chose. It looks as though Yoda is actually speaking. Well done.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You wrote a good poem
with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how Yoda instructs his young Jedi.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You wrote a good poem
with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how Yoda instructs his young Jedi.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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I don't know if the syllable count matters in the contest, but I just reviewed most of them in it and they used the 5-7-5 format. I wasn't sure at the time if it mattered. You have 5-5-7. You could contact the sponsor directly with a private message and ask, or you could change it up a little. On FS, haiku is often seen as a 5-7-5 poem. I wanted to let you know.
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I changed it. Thank you for letting me know. Please check it.
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You are welcome. I checked it, and it is fine. I changed your review for you to reflect what you have now. A good job!
Comment from RodG
Your haiku pretty well summarizes Yoda's importance in the Star Wars epics while expressing a key theme. We are reminded of the "force" as well as the "dark side" epitomized by Darth Vader.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
Your haiku pretty well summarizes Yoda's importance in the Star Wars epics while expressing a key theme. We are reminded of the "force" as well as the "dark side" epitomized by Darth Vader.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you!