One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your contemporary haiku.
I love the play on the word 'thyme' and I also love the phrase 'dilly dally'
Effective use of alliteration in line 2, and playful imagery.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your contemporary haiku.
I love the play on the word 'thyme' and I also love the phrase 'dilly dally'
Effective use of alliteration in line 2, and playful imagery.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you very much, Debra. You are very kind. I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem.
gypsy hugs
