Sarah
abusing a child emotionally26 total reviews
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
That is quite a story. I enjoyed it. I am sorry to hear about Carol's insecurities and how she treated her children. I realize you were a true blessing to Sarah and am so happy she is doing well. What happened to her little brother? Such a sad story, but so well written. Good work!
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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That is quite a story. I enjoyed it. I am sorry to hear about Carol's insecurities and how she treated her children. I realize you were a true blessing to Sarah and am so happy she is doing well. What happened to her little brother? Such a sad story, but so well written. Good work!
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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I have not seen Jimmy in years, but I am told by Sarah, he has a girlfriend and a young daughter and is living with his dad so as Carl will not be alone.
Thank you for your kind words and review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartrending. Gripping story--it captivated me from the get-go despite my aversion to the subject--which is a testament to your narrative skill. You did your best in a no-win situation.
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Heartrending. Gripping story--it captivated me from the get-go despite my aversion to the subject--which is a testament to your narrative skill. You did your best in a no-win situation.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind thoughts. It is appreciated.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Wow, this is very powerful. The kids were lucky to have someone like you looking out for them the best you could, given the situation.
I always wonder how many crappy parents are out there whose kids never have someone to step in and advocate on their behalf. Very sad.
Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Wow, this is very powerful. The kids were lucky to have someone like you looking out for them the best you could, given the situation.
I always wonder how many crappy parents are out there whose kids never have someone to step in and advocate on their behalf. Very sad.
Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you I appreciate your review and your kind words.
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely right, one doesn't have to beat a child to be an abuser. It is so important to separate the wood from the trees. Yes, you see it often, somehow even a child can be a threat to their parent. But all children deserved to be loved, nurtured, protected, with affection, told they are very precious, because they are! And children are naturally selfish, immature, but fantastically precious and vulnerable, their innocence should be protected. Well done, great story, blessings Roy
Typo : that i(t) was my wedding...2: She told me (she) wanted to keep her secret.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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You're absolutely right, one doesn't have to beat a child to be an abuser. It is so important to separate the wood from the trees. Yes, you see it often, somehow even a child can be a threat to their parent. But all children deserved to be loved, nurtured, protected, with affection, told they are very precious, because they are! And children are naturally selfish, immature, but fantastically precious and vulnerable, their innocence should be protected. Well done, great story, blessings Roy
Typo : that i(t) was my wedding...2: She told me (she) wanted to keep her secret.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for the review. It truly appreciated. Thank you for catching the misspells.
Blessings always.
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Good job
Comment from Leann DS
This was an interesting story, that had a lot of detail and kept my interest from beginning to end. It is a sad story, and things like that happen way too often.
If I may, I noticed some typos as follows:
By then I had met another friend named Priscilla. Admittedly, she was as controlling as Carol. My... would preoccupy both parties. I finally had to remind each party that I was my wedding. At least, my wedding reception went smoothly.
* remind each party that it
I knew it was a long shot when I asked Carol if 12-year-old Sarah could be as a Junior Bridesmaid, but as expected, Carol would not allow it. Sarah's behavior did not allow her to be awarded.
* 12 year olds Sara could be a
* be rewarded
Looking now at my wedding pictures today and see an unsmiling Carol looking expressionlessly into the camera.
* pictures today, I
Now I only see or hear from Sarah every three or four years or so. I did not...memories. She told me wanted to keep her childhood secret from her husband.
* she told me she wanted
I, also, have taken care of teenagers that were not mine. I, also, I've had my feelings hurt by their dismissal of me in later years for whatever reason. From your story, I don't think you did anything wrong or could have done anything differently. You seemed to have done your very best at that time and in that situation. Don't beat yourself up. thank you for sharing the story. I hope my comments are helpful. Hugs to you.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This was an interesting story, that had a lot of detail and kept my interest from beginning to end. It is a sad story, and things like that happen way too often.
If I may, I noticed some typos as follows:
By then I had met another friend named Priscilla. Admittedly, she was as controlling as Carol. My... would preoccupy both parties. I finally had to remind each party that I was my wedding. At least, my wedding reception went smoothly.
* remind each party that it
I knew it was a long shot when I asked Carol if 12-year-old Sarah could be as a Junior Bridesmaid, but as expected, Carol would not allow it. Sarah's behavior did not allow her to be awarded.
* 12 year olds Sara could be a
* be rewarded
Looking now at my wedding pictures today and see an unsmiling Carol looking expressionlessly into the camera.
* pictures today, I
Now I only see or hear from Sarah every three or four years or so. I did not...memories. She told me wanted to keep her childhood secret from her husband.
* she told me she wanted
I, also, have taken care of teenagers that were not mine. I, also, I've had my feelings hurt by their dismissal of me in later years for whatever reason. From your story, I don't think you did anything wrong or could have done anything differently. You seemed to have done your very best at that time and in that situation. Don't beat yourself up. thank you for sharing the story. I hope my comments are helpful. Hugs to you.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for your kind review and encouragement. Thank you for your help in correcting my grammar.
Comment from equestrik
What a very sad story and these actions by the mother are certainly abusive. I wonder what happened to Sarah's littl brother. This shows good story development.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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What a very sad story and these actions by the mother are certainly abusive. I wonder what happened to Sarah's littl brother. This shows good story development.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Jimmy and his girlfriend live with his dad. I only hear about him through Sarah. I know Jimmy has a little girl.
Thank you for the review.
