Poetic History
A poet is shy to reveal her poems.5 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This presentation is very good. I enjoyed the words of Maya and your subsequent poem about writing poems. Congratulations on coming first in this contest.
Ralf
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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This presentation is very good. I enjoyed the words of Maya and your subsequent poem about writing poems. Congratulations on coming first in this contest.
Ralf
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from mobileliz
cool. I like that you wrote a poem about writing poetry. It's a fun way to get your point across. And the picture is cleaver as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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cool. I like that you wrote a poem about writing poetry. It's a fun way to get your point across. And the picture is cleaver as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from karenina
Love Maya. Love her quote.
Love also, the tone and tenor of your stacks.
I've a bad habit of pronouncing poem....pome.
Thus I halted in second line of second stanza...
No! It's me! It's seven syllables for sure!
A worthy entry..on fact I am about to cast my vote for it!
I sincerely hope you win!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Love Maya. Love her quote.
Love also, the tone and tenor of your stacks.
I've a bad habit of pronouncing poem....pome.
Thus I halted in second line of second stanza...
No! It's me! It's seven syllables for sure!
A worthy entry..on fact I am about to cast my vote for it!
I sincerely hope you win!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you!
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Happy weekend!--Karenina
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Thank you! Same to you too!
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:))
Comment from DentedSyke
The first two stanzas really resonated with me. The words evoke old-world charm and even makes me think that this is what Maya Angelou would have thought. These stanzas are real poetry! I felt like the style and words chosen in the other stanzas didn't flow with the first two stanzas. A little too hip and modern, and a little informal. Still, this is a very good poem that could be a great poem with some re-working.
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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The first two stanzas really resonated with me. The words evoke old-world charm and even makes me think that this is what Maya Angelou would have thought. These stanzas are real poetry! I felt like the style and words chosen in the other stanzas didn't flow with the first two stanzas. A little too hip and modern, and a little informal. Still, this is a very good poem that could be a great poem with some re-working.
Comment Written 06-May-2021
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a smooth stacked 5-7-5 poem that flows well. I particularly liked the third stanza with the idea of opening up to a limited readership. Not too scary that.
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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This is a smooth stacked 5-7-5 poem that flows well. I particularly liked the third stanza with the idea of opening up to a limited readership. Not too scary that.
Comment Written 06-May-2021
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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Thank you!
