Legend Says
An adventure or is it pure terror?22 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Fabulous description of the eerie atmosphere and what a fine ending. I knew there'd be a twist, but I wasn't expecting that. I'm glad I don't have any sisters! LOL
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Fabulous description of the eerie atmosphere and what a fine ending. I knew there'd be a twist, but I wasn't expecting that. I'm glad I don't have any sisters! LOL
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Girl power! LOL I was the little sister that got left behind or tortured all the time. What goes around comes around and sometimes it's not until later in life. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Audra J Perez
great work, no complaints this is honestly so so moving and id love to read more everyone on here is so talented, im truly moved by this, im not sure what more to add to be honest, keep it up!
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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great work, no complaints this is honestly so so moving and id love to read more everyone on here is so talented, im truly moved by this, im not sure what more to add to be honest, keep it up!
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for your review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Bill Schott
This Edward...farmhouse story, Legend Says, had me right next to Edward as he climbed those steep, rickety steps to finally get scared stupid by his rotten sister. Luckily he didn't let a bullet go. Great tale.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This Edward...farmhouse story, Legend Says, had me right next to Edward as he climbed those steep, rickety steps to finally get scared stupid by his rotten sister. Luckily he didn't let a bullet go. Great tale.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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thanks so much for your kindness. It was fun to write and let girl power win...especially over a big brother. Smiles, Carol
Comment from zanya
Love it - has a wonderful millenial-feel with his 'ghost-fighting weapons'- the atmosphere crackles with expectation and the reader climbs the stairs too - until some old-fashioned tried and tested scare-mongering comes into view ! - a real story-telling treat Has my vote !
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Love it - has a wonderful millenial-feel with his 'ghost-fighting weapons'- the atmosphere crackles with expectation and the reader climbs the stairs too - until some old-fashioned tried and tested scare-mongering comes into view ! - a real story-telling treat Has my vote !
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much, Zanya. It is very nice to (semi) meet you as you enjoy one of my stories. I appreciate your thoughts and also the lovely stars you've sent my way. Have a great day!
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is an interesting story that builds in suspense from the beginning to the surprise ending. Big brother Edward wasn't as brave as he thought he was, and Emma knew he wasn't. She who laughs last, scares the heck out of her older brother. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is an interesting story that builds in suspense from the beginning to the surprise ending. Big brother Edward wasn't as brave as he thought he was, and Emma knew he wasn't. She who laughs last, scares the heck out of her older brother. Well done.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Lorraine, No, girl power wins! He thought he was so smart and would leave her out in the cold, but she got the last laugh. Thanks for the review. Have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and Emma got her revenge here. I love your surprise ending after the build up, much fun and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and Emma got her revenge here. I love your surprise ending after the build up, much fun and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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thank you Dolly for your kind review. Girl power to the end... especially when the receiver is the older brother leaving you behind. Have a great day!
Comment from Wendy G
A very well written story with a clever ending. You have built up the suspense and have spoken of the typical brother sister relationship without giving a single hint of the ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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A very well written story with a clever ending. You have built up the suspense and have spoken of the typical brother sister relationship without giving a single hint of the ending. Well done.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Yes... girl power till the end... especially when the big brother believes he can leave the sister behind because it's a job for a man. Not! Have a great day!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Well, that will teach him to not take his sister with him! You are very descriptive. I can see him take off running down the stairs without a backward glance. Good job! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Well, that will teach him to not take his sister with him! You are very descriptive. I can see him take off running down the stairs without a backward glance. Good job! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Girl power for sure! Big brothers and men, in general, believe they can do it so much better than the women... Guess he was wrong, and she got the last laugh. Have a great day!
Comment from Angel Thompson
Great read. You created an almost tangible atmosphere. And the way you ended this story is clever to say the least. It made me laugh out loud and I immediately thought of my little brother. Really good job with the contest prompt.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Great read. You created an almost tangible atmosphere. And the way you ended this story is clever to say the least. It made me laugh out loud and I immediately thought of my little brother. Really good job with the contest prompt.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review on my contest entry. I appreciate it very much and the shiny stars are definitely a nice surprise. Have a great day!
Comment from mobileliz
A little scary at first, reminded me of Ghost Busters. My breathing changed when his did and was glad he'd left his sister behind in safety. But the ending was a total surprise and well worth the suspense. Good job, nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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A little scary at first, reminded me of Ghost Busters. My breathing changed when his did and was glad he'd left his sister behind in safety. But the ending was a total surprise and well worth the suspense. Good job, nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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thank you for the kind review and for liking the story. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day! thanks for the shiny stars as well. Totally unexpected.
