The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Team Assembles"The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
8 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I kind of got off on the wrong track, thinking for some silly reason Cris was another woman, but now I'm back on track. It might be because I'm an ol' Kentucky boy who already liked the idea of Cal being a rough and tumble Tennessee gal. Maybe that made me hope for two. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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I kind of got off on the wrong track, thinking for some silly reason Cris was another woman, but now I'm back on track. It might be because I'm an ol' Kentucky boy who already liked the idea of Cal being a rough and tumble Tennessee gal. Maybe that made me hope for two. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Ric. Thank you for hopping on board with this book.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Looking forward to another Gabriel Hope journey, Mike.
It has been a while. I believe we will enjoy the way this teem moves forward to clean up the world around them and destroy evil before it gets a good hold. If Only. (sigh)
Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Looking forward to another Gabriel Hope journey, Mike.
It has been a while. I believe we will enjoy the way this teem moves forward to clean up the world around them and destroy evil before it gets a good hold. If Only. (sigh)
Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi, Nancy. You are the best. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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My pleasure. Have a nice day! NAncy:)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your story is so beautiful I enjoyed this prayer and faith into the All Mighty: "~
Gabe walks out the back of Second Chance Church and takes a deep breath. "Another great day to be alive." He sees Michael kneeling under the Oak, praying.
Michael nods his head and smiles. "Yes, Father. I will, thank You." He slowly rises and sees Gabe approaching. "The Father sends His love, Gabriel."
"I need nothing else, and He always has mine."" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Your story is so beautiful I enjoyed this prayer and faith into the All Mighty: "~
Gabe walks out the back of Second Chance Church and takes a deep breath. "Another great day to be alive." He sees Michael kneeling under the Oak, praying.
Michael nods his head and smiles. "Yes, Father. I will, thank You." He slowly rises and sees Gabe approaching. "The Father sends His love, Gabriel."
"I need nothing else, and He always has mine."" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi, Iza. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
This is an interest story Mike. It is a bit different from most of the stories on this site but I think I will enjoy reading it. You've created some interesting characters.
Beth
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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This is an interest story Mike. It is a bit different from most of the stories on this site but I think I will enjoy reading it. You've created some interesting characters.
Beth
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Action-packed stunner. I read the prior chapter when you posted it--I vivdly recall the finger-breaking finale. Startling ending here too! Characters and dialog ring true to the circumstances: BINGO!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Action-packed stunner. I read the prior chapter when you posted it--I vivdly recall the finger-breaking finale. Startling ending here too! Characters and dialog ring true to the circumstances: BINGO!
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi, Elizabeth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Cybertron1986
I found this to be a very exciting and easy read, which equaled to quite an entertaining ride for me as the reader. Very engaging dialogue and presentation of your characters. Love the sci-fi flair that conveyed a lot of passion and thought. Very well done.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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I found this to be a very exciting and easy read, which equaled to quite an entertaining ride for me as the reader. Very engaging dialogue and presentation of your characters. Love the sci-fi flair that conveyed a lot of passion and thought. Very well done.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from elchupakabra
You certainly have a viable audience for this story, I don't know that I'm one of them, but the one note I would offer is that there are times you use colons or semi colons frequently and I might cut down on that (I have the same habit) but otherwise good work and good luck. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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You certainly have a viable audience for this story, I don't know that I'm one of them, but the one note I would offer is that there are times you use colons or semi colons frequently and I might cut down on that (I have the same habit) but otherwise good work and good luck. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words! I will slow down on the semi-colons.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
Another great episode in the adventures of this godly, intrepid and well built crew. It's funny, but I've often wondered about the appearances of Michael he has often turned up, particularly in OT times. I love your characters in this, all about two feet faller, but it's not about the size of one's physique, but the size of their faith. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Another great episode in the adventures of this godly, intrepid and well built crew. It's funny, but I've often wondered about the appearances of Michael he has often turned up, particularly in OT times. I love your characters in this, all about two feet faller, but it's not about the size of one's physique, but the size of their faith. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You too
