Alone
What if?3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Alone, has the required syllable count IF the ellipsis is considered a word. The feel of this work is one of second-guessing like decisions. I do this once a week.
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Alone, has the required syllable count IF the ellipsis is considered a word. The feel of this work is one of second-guessing like decisions. I do this once a week.
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from kahpot
"If only" such a huge thing to be thinking about it can lead to many dark places, very well written, you have said a great deal in so few words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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"If only" such a huge thing to be thinking about it can lead to many dark places, very well written, you have said a great deal in so few words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Begin Again
the what ifs and if onlys don't add up to much but worry and heartache. We have to move forward and look for new beginnings. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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the what ifs and if onlys don't add up to much but worry and heartache. We have to move forward and look for new beginnings. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Many thanks
