Tuesday night treat
The perfect housewife12 total reviews
Comment from Susan Newell
This is very funny. What a naughty lady with a very interesting hobby. Your poem is nicely rhymed and reads easily.
and make - out with -- I don't think you need the hyphen, just "make out."
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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This is very funny. What a naughty lady with a very interesting hobby. Your poem is nicely rhymed and reads easily.
and make - out with -- I don't think you need the hyphen, just "make out."
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Many thanks Susan fir the great review.
Comment from Lana Marie
That's a naughty little hobby she's got going on there.
I would not have guessed that her Tuesday night treat was her neighbor, Dennis.
You may want to edit the word Neighbor �
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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That's a naughty little hobby she's got going on there.
I would not have guessed that her Tuesday night treat was her neighbor, Dennis.
You may want to edit the word Neighbor �
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thanks Lana Marie for your review. I am British and that is the way we spell it.
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Oh nice, now I can hear your accent in my mind.
