End or Beginning for America
As a person thinks and speaks, so it will be!23 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very well written poetry, excellent Biblical perspective, which I agree with completely. God's people need to wake up, and bring as many others into the fold as possible, through God's grace and the Presence of the Holy Spirit in the world.
One suggestion:
Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
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Praying for godly discernment is what it will take [I think it's with a small "g" even in the Bible]
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No matter what's going on around us, we have to keep our eyes on Jesus!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Very well written poetry, excellent Biblical perspective, which I agree with completely. God's people need to wake up, and bring as many others into the fold as possible, through God's grace and the Presence of the Holy Spirit in the world.
One suggestion:
Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
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Praying for godly discernment is what it will take [I think it's with a small "g" even in the Bible]
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No matter what's going on around us, we have to keep our eyes on Jesus!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thanks Mary Kay for your time once again. It is appreciated a lot. I recall him saying to wake up sleepers. I pray that those asleep will awaken as those that are awake lift Him up in order they be drawn in. If you ask me, our instructions are pretty plain. Thanks Again and have a great and positive weekend and upcoming week.
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You're very welcome, Jennifer, and thank you, also. Yes, God has left us clear instructions. May we all be obedient to our loving Master and Friend! Blessings, Mary Kay
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming and a good description of what our world is like today.
I agree with your verse: "Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
In order to see light from the dark and differentiate". God is in control and we know that the future is in His hands.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Great rhyming and a good description of what our world is like today.
I agree with your verse: "Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
In order to see light from the dark and differentiate". God is in control and we know that the future is in His hands.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your time once again. I do appreciate it so much. Some petitions, request and a move come only through fasting (deny self) and prayer (believing)! Have a great week and thanks again!
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You are welcome
Comment from equestrik
I think the picture along with your writing and the quote give food for thought-good points well made and yes, people perish for lack of knowledge and vision.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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I think the picture along with your writing and the quote give food for thought-good points well made and yes, people perish for lack of knowledge and vision.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your time reviewing words from the heart me inspired by Him. I don't know and maybe it is just me, but it seems there is no thirst to want to know anything. Living in a box and can't see further than that. Not every soul, thank God, and now is the time for His knowledge to abound! Those that are hungry and thirsty are filled!
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Praying for a six string to adorn this thought provoking piece. It looks like Communism has arrived. Like sin it conquers from within. Now it is up to We, the people to take a stand or lose our land.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Praying for a six string to adorn this thought provoking piece. It looks like Communism has arrived. Like sin it conquers from within. Now it is up to We, the people to take a stand or lose our land.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. It is unbelievable, no doubt. I ask everyday what far fetched upside down event, news, behavior, and alike will knock today. Life being divided at it's core. May those that are fully awake help awaken the sleepy before there truly is No More "We the people". Instead it will be "We Own You". Not much difference except when you come into the knowledge, you have no excuse. Now you know you have been a slave in this system.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Basic America will never disappear. There are those who think they have the answer with a new way, but beware the traps lurking 'round every corner. Who are these people who have nothing more to do than to try to repair something that doesn't need fixing? Your poem asks the right questions.
Ralf
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Basic America will never disappear. There are those who think they have the answer with a new way, but beware the traps lurking 'round every corner. Who are these people who have nothing more to do than to try to repair something that doesn't need fixing? Your poem asks the right questions.
Ralf
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. Truth is stranger than fiction and traps are set and more everyday. If the owner of the house knew what time the thief was coming, he would prepare! Thanks again and enjoy your weekend and upcoming week!
Comment from amahra
I really like what you wrote. And I believe God is allowing the enemy to play its hand. You know those old movies when the crook thinks he's gotten away, he starts bragging and getting sloppy, not knowing outside his remain, he's surrounding.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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I really like what you wrote. And I believe God is allowing the enemy to play its hand. You know those old movies when the crook thinks he's gotten away, he starts bragging and getting sloppy, not knowing outside his remain, he's surrounding.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. Yes, God still has reign on the darkness. We know that will not be so always. He gives full power to them and it could be very soon. We need to vibrate together on a frequency that breaks barriers and keeps harmony. Greater is He within us then he outside in the world. Thank you again and have a great weekend and upcoming week.
Comment from royowen
I think it's clearly the "end of days". There's little doubt about, environment "experts" think we can save the world by changing rules of engagement, but all they'll do it, apply pressure, it's the heart that needs changing, and generations of people who continue in their selfish ways, even experts fly in planes, the worst source of pollution, giving their hypocritical lectures, exchanging one religion fo another. Beautifully written my friend, articulate, well rhymed, and well presented, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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I think it's clearly the "end of days". There's little doubt about, environment "experts" think we can save the world by changing rules of engagement, but all they'll do it, apply pressure, it's the heart that needs changing, and generations of people who continue in their selfish ways, even experts fly in planes, the worst source of pollution, giving their hypocritical lectures, exchanging one religion fo another. Beautifully written my friend, articulate, well rhymed, and well presented, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you again Roy for your time reviewing this writing. We now that he comes to change times and laws. No doubt the heart has, is and will be what matters at the end. People should examine their heart for this is what God looks at. Other than yourself and God does anyone else know what kind of heart your soul houses. "Appear as you are and be as you appear". Rumi
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I don?t even trust my own heart, but God?s, we are supposed to be on His side, not the other way around.
Comment from Janet Foor
America certainly is in a quandary. And if you speak about it to some people, you are a hater and just don't understand.
Your poem speaks clearly the problem. People do perish for lack of knowledge and vision.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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America certainly is in a quandary. And if you speak about it to some people, you are a hater and just don't understand.
Your poem speaks clearly the problem. People do perish for lack of knowledge and vision.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you Janet for your time and review. I apologize for taking longer than I desired to respond and tell you I appreciate you and all those that give of their time. Yes ma'am, it is heart wrenching to know that nobody desires for truth, a desire God would like to have in our inward man. Thanks again!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Jennifer,
Yes, praying for Godly discernment is a must. Thank God we have the Holy Spirit of truth to guide us, direct us, help us and protect us...if we come out of/turn off the world system.
Excellent rhymes and flow here. Interesting how you used as above so below, as it clearly has occultic roots.
I agree with your thoughts here. As far as Nineveh goes...Jesus said that all the blood of the prophets would be avenged in the final days.
That it would be more tolerable for Sodom and Gamorah than it would be for us...unless a true follower of Jesus...in which case death has no power.
Sadly, their will be much weeping and knashing of teeth...when the door is closed on those that thought they followed Christ...
Anna
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Jennifer,
Yes, praying for Godly discernment is a must. Thank God we have the Holy Spirit of truth to guide us, direct us, help us and protect us...if we come out of/turn off the world system.
Excellent rhymes and flow here. Interesting how you used as above so below, as it clearly has occultic roots.
I agree with your thoughts here. As far as Nineveh goes...Jesus said that all the blood of the prophets would be avenged in the final days.
That it would be more tolerable for Sodom and Gamorah than it would be for us...unless a true follower of Jesus...in which case death has no power.
Sadly, their will be much weeping and knashing of teeth...when the door is closed on those that thought they followed Christ...
Anna
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Anna, thank you so much for your time and your review. It is appreciated more than you know. We are certainly living in an age and time just like those days, as well as the days of Noah. Ignorance certainly is not bliss and we all know the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Good deeds will not do it either. That broken and contrite heart and that Godly sorrow that brings repentance, now, that will do it! Have a good one and thank you again.
Comment from wilbs
I usually tried to be consistent into rating my reviews but once in a while, I find myself being connected to somebody's that is beyond, what I have already anticipated could be my bias point, I had to cross it, and I thank for you sharing this one. I love it.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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I usually tried to be consistent into rating my reviews but once in a while, I find myself being connected to somebody's that is beyond, what I have already anticipated could be my bias point, I had to cross it, and I thank for you sharing this one. I love it.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for your time to review my poem. I am sorry for the length of time getting my appreciation to you. I am grateful to have someone's time to review my writings. Incredible the delusion isn't it? Thanks again!
