Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I was just browsing and found this, and I'm glad I did. It's such a shame that we're divided by race, and to me teaching critical race theory isn't helping. It's just transferring the hatred from one group to another. School children don't need to be subjected to this teaching. They usually can figure things out for themselves. They don't need to be burdened with feelings of guilt of victimhood. Excellent work with your rhyme, and an excellent choice of artwork. Yes, we are our own enemy. judi

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for your intelligent comments. I feel so strongly about what is going on that I can't help but speak up. Thank you for your insight on the subject. :)

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

I couldn't agree more We have the same rubbish happening here in Australia not allowed to call girls and boys Wife husband male female etc according to some BE academics who wouldn't know a bloody thing . We seemed to be ruled by the loud minority lately Same with our black indiginous people they seem to create the racism etc
I want to from the Politically Incorrect Party To stop this rot wonder how many would join I think I would be surprised Woke Go away
A well written poem good one
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for agreeing with me. I think maybe the world has gone crazy, but I hope I'm wrong and things straighten out. So glad to hear from you, thanks again. :)

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I think his is really well done and it evokes a lot of thought as well as feelings. Your picture choice is well done for your writing and i wish you all th best.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021

Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is well written and makes a lot of sense. Our world changed over night and it gets worse with each passing day. I hope something happens before we are so off track that we can't ever find our way back. What I don't understand is why we've not heard the word IMPEACH? They started impeachment for Donald Trump before he even took office and had done nothing wrong. Within a day Biden started throwing us under the bus.
Patty

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments. I fear where this country is heading. Thanks again.

Comment from Eunice Amero

Exceptional

wowwwww wow wow I love this poem. How did you do it so well? You must be a professional. Keep up the good work, I'm sure you will. I've written a lot of poems but you beat me. Good luck

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for this exceptional review..it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I like your last two lines - my thoughts exactly! You have expressed clearly your distress and sadness, using the necessary words seamlessly. Best wishes for this fine entry.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021

Thank you for reading my poem, I'm always glad to hear from fellow writers. I really appreciate it.

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

Excellent in thoughts and verse. People have to wake up to this scourge that is threatening to rip us apart and tear us down.

One tweak:

so has the rules. ==> have

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021

Thank you for this nice review, it means a lot to me. :)

reply by Susan Newell on 05-Jun-2021

Any praise was well earned!

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Absolutely! 100% agree! I don't understand why the left is working so hard to divide us and convince us all that white people are inherently racist. This is not what we should be teaching children. Children don't see color and we're trying to teach then to do so from a young age! Sounds like the 1800s to me. Excellent job! You should be very proud of this poem

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021

Thank you for your excellent review and your comments, which I agree with. Much appreciated. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Thank you so much, mystery poet. I'd rather go back to sleep too. Woke to a horrid life of the worst stuff since WW2 actually. I can't believe what these hateful people are getting away with it and they are THE most racist of them all. Worse is what is not being said, called out and addressed, arrested, and prosecuted by our leaders and authorities. Sick!
Sending you my best today as always. I hope we get to cast a vote here. Good luck in the contest,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021

Thank you for this terrific review and your insightful comments. Of course I agree with everything you said..thanks again for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The required words fit in -perfectly in your words of truth. Your rhymes are super, there's good flow, and your message stands above anything else. Yes, it's a time of division that doesn't have to be. We all share this planet and need to work together to solve problems that concern all of the people, but in a positive way. Your picture is perfect. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021

Thank you for this excellent review and your insightful comments which I agree with. Very appreciated. :)