Who Are You?
Joseph's Star Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
This is such a motivating piece that gives great advice to the reader. Finding our path in life is not always easy, but I love how you added "assistance from others". Without this, our stories are not complete. Good writing!
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This is such a motivating piece that gives great advice to the reader. Finding our path in life is not always easy, but I love how you added "assistance from others". Without this, our stories are not complete. Good writing!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
That's good, I feel like we all are trying to find our way, but not everybody seems to find assistance from others for whatever reason. It's great when you finally find yourself along with your purpose. Great writing
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That's good, I feel like we all are trying to find our way, but not everybody seems to find assistance from others for whatever reason. It's great when you finally find yourself along with your purpose. Great writing
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from TPAC
The bottom line you stated brings the dispersed fragments into a vivid picture proclaimed in this view, cutting view with precise cuts of reality embedded to consider. An interesting write in my given viewpoint.
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The bottom line you stated brings the dispersed fragments into a vivid picture proclaimed in this view, cutting view with precise cuts of reality embedded to consider. An interesting write in my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Judy England-McCarthy
Good overall message and like format you used along with your adherent to it. However, I would reconsider changing either Find your way and Find your way in life to something different because you already have find your purpose in life. This way it removes the repetitive nature of your piece. I like that you ended on found. Good solid way to end.
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Good overall message and like format you used along with your adherent to it. However, I would reconsider changing either Find your way and Find your way in life to something different because you already have find your purpose in life. This way it removes the repetitive nature of your piece. I like that you ended on found. Good solid way to end.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
This Joseph's star poem offers a directive, challenging one to fond themselves, through a series of ways to do so.
Well constructed and presented.
Thank you for sharing your work.
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This Joseph's star poem offers a directive, challenging one to fond themselves, through a series of ways to do so.
Well constructed and presented.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Cat Merto
Nice ,
Everyone need to find who they are as well as their own direction in life
And sometimes they need a little help along the way and that okay
It's a life long journey
And the path we choose
Is whether we win or lose
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Nice ,
Everyone need to find who they are as well as their own direction in life
And sometimes they need a little help along the way and that okay
It's a life long journey
And the path we choose
Is whether we win or lose
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
