Prairie Wishes
Many already are praying for rain.9 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely presentation. The well chosen picture goes well with your writing and the scene unfolds in a lovely irony of rain. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This is a lovely presentation. The well chosen picture goes well with your writing and the scene unfolds in a lovely irony of rain. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Karen Estep
"Sprinkling unsparingly". That choice of words alone gives a great mental image! Your graphic is beautiful, and I enjoyed your writing, which followed the syllable count perfectly! Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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"Sprinkling unsparingly". That choice of words alone gives a great mental image! Your graphic is beautiful, and I enjoyed your writing, which followed the syllable count perfectly! Great job!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I am so pleased my poem produced a vivid mental image for you. Thank you for your kind praise.
Comment from Lana Marie
That's a really pretty picture to go with your poem that doesn't have a rhyme. Good luck on this contest. You did a great job following the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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That's a really pretty picture to go with your poem that doesn't have a rhyme. Good luck on this contest. You did a great job following the writing prompt.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem and Ms. Wade?s art.
Comment from Patty Palmer
When drought season comes around for many places, praying for rain is about all you can do. You can do a rain dance. You could howl at the moon, but I doubt it would help. Of course, stranger things have happened. Sorry for being silly. I love the picture. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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When drought season comes around for many places, praying for rain is about all you can do. You can do a rain dance. You could howl at the moon, but I doubt it would help. Of course, stranger things have happened. Sorry for being silly. I love the picture. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Many thanks, Patty, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Asante
I love how much imagery you out into the poem! I could picture the girl walking as flowers are moving, the black clouds gathering etc.. It was a nice and sweet poem!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I love how much imagery you out into the poem! I could picture the girl walking as flowers are moving, the black clouds gathering etc.. It was a nice and sweet poem!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and six bright stars. I am very pleased you like the imagery.
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You're welcome!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Ha, those flowers look remarkably healthy if they are in the middle of a drought, which is what the poem suggests! To rub it in, we are in winter here and in the midst of a longish spell of rain!
You tackled the form well, although you may have broken the rule about complete statements in each line.
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Ha, those flowers look remarkably healthy if they are in the middle of a drought, which is what the poem suggests! To rub it in, we are in winter here and in the midst of a longish spell of rain!
You tackled the form well, although you may have broken the rule about complete statements in each line.
Steve
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I truly appreciate your comments, Steve, and I must confess I did not read all the contest requirements. I wish we could get SOME of the rain you?re getting.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written Joseph's star. Beautiful overall presentation background colour and font. I love your photo it compliments your words so well. Such a sweet photo of the little girl with her watering can. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a nicely written Joseph's star. Beautiful overall presentation background colour and font. I love your photo it compliments your words so well. Such a sweet photo of the little girl with her watering can. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I am delighted you enjoyed the overall presentation of my Joseph?s Star and the artwork chosen to complement it.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a great entry for the contest. I lobe the image of the little girl trying to save natural beauty and hoping for help with the task. This is a well composed poem. Good luck in the contest.
I might not cap the first word, since there is no period at the end.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a great entry for the contest. I lobe the image of the little girl trying to save natural beauty and hoping for help with the task. This is a well composed poem. Good luck in the contest.
I might not cap the first word, since there is no period at the end.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much, Susan, for those great kudos. I am delighted you, too, love Ms. Wade?s art.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This Joseph's Star poem paints a lovely picture of a wildflower garden.
Nicely put together with artwork that reinforces the poem,s storyline.
Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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This Joseph's Star poem paints a lovely picture of a wildflower garden.
Nicely put together with artwork that reinforces the poem,s storyline.
Good job.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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I am so pleased you like my poem. Thank you for reviewing.
