Memories of Life
A Kanshi Poem-for the club challenge16 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Kahpot,
This is a very lovely poem with strong emotions and images.
Life is fragile sometimes, but your unshattered em glass demonstrates how beautiful and resilient life can be.
Excellent poem, Kahpot.
Blessings, Cindy.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Kahpot,
This is a very lovely poem with strong emotions and images.
Life is fragile sometimes, but your unshattered em glass demonstrates how beautiful and resilient life can be.
Excellent poem, Kahpot.
Blessings, Cindy.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You?re welcome, Kahpot.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a really lovely, vividly descriptive poem. It movingly expresses a message about the power of light to pierce darkness--literally and figuratively.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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This is a really lovely, vividly descriptive poem. It movingly expresses a message about the power of light to pierce darkness--literally and figuratively.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
This is a beautiful response to the club challenge. This kanshi captures the poignancy of life being preserved as memories on unbreakable glass. Some events in our lives are so powerful that the impression left behind is like etchings on glass. They will never fade.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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This is a beautiful response to the club challenge. This kanshi captures the poignancy of life being preserved as memories on unbreakable glass. Some events in our lives are so powerful that the impression left behind is like etchings on glass. They will never fade.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much, and yes unfortunately or fortunately some events are that powerful, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Patty Palmer
Our memories are in stained glass windows that come alive whenever we want them to. Just think of a certain person or something you had done together and move back as the entire experience will unfold in an instant.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Our memories are in stained glass windows that come alive whenever we want them to. Just think of a certain person or something you had done together and move back as the entire experience will unfold in an instant.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Exactly, thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from pharp
Kahpot,
The Kanshi form of poetry is a fascinating style; your author's notes are most informative.
You have penned a delightful poem, using clear and descriptive words, making this a most enjoyable read. Outstanding job, my friend... Thanks so much for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Kahpot,
The Kanshi form of poetry is a fascinating style; your author's notes are most informative.
You have penned a delightful poem, using clear and descriptive words, making this a most enjoyable read. Outstanding job, my friend... Thanks so much for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you Portia, yes I quite like this form, your comments are very encouraging, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AnnaLinda
Kym,
This is an interesting form and thank you for your notes. I love the depth this piece has.
Piercing reflections painting painting unbreakable glass. Priceless!
Impacting last line as well.
Anna
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Kym,
This is an interesting form and thank you for your notes. I love the depth this piece has.
Piercing reflections painting painting unbreakable glass. Priceless!
Impacting last line as well.
Anna
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, yes I quite like this form, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Memories of Life
by kahpot
Excellent Kanshi Poem-for the club challenge, Kym. You grasped the kanshi form well. It's a beautiful romantic poem with a moody blue sentiment. Well done!!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Memories of Life
by kahpot
Excellent Kanshi Poem-for the club challenge, Kym. You grasped the kanshi form well. It's a beautiful romantic poem with a moody blue sentiment. Well done!!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for our most encouraging comments, I am glad you liked it, I enjoy this form****kahpot
Comment from Janetsue
I am not familiar with this poetic form but it is a lovely one and you have done very well. I cannot count the times I sat at the window in the moonlight and marveled over the sky and sleeping world. Thank you for sharing this!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I am not familiar with this poetic form but it is a lovely one and you have done very well. I cannot count the times I sat at the window in the moonlight and marveled over the sky and sleeping world. Thank you for sharing this!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, and yes sitting and wondering about the world outside has become a habit of late for many, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is an excellent posting for Gypsy's club entry. While I know the moon is not falling from the sky, the first line by itself implies this in my simple mind. Waxing and waning are moon phases. Wanes instead of falls may be more accurate but does not sound as poetic (-;
The piercing reflections is a terrific phrase. Do like your black and white colors and your artwork for your poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This is an excellent posting for Gypsy's club entry. While I know the moon is not falling from the sky, the first line by itself implies this in my simple mind. Waxing and waning are moon phases. Wanes instead of falls may be more accurate but does not sound as poetic (-;
The piercing reflections is a terrific phrase. Do like your black and white colors and your artwork for your poem.
Mark
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you Mark, I did not know about waning and I think that wanes is also quite poetic, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dilettante junior
Great job with this short. The poem is replete with beautiful imagery. Love the way you described the moon's reflection as unbreakable glass, almost a mirror of life. Light dissipates the darkness. It also speaks of duality- the fragility of life, yet invincible it is with what we make of it.
Well done!
Cheers,
DJ
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Great job with this short. The poem is replete with beautiful imagery. Love the way you described the moon's reflection as unbreakable glass, almost a mirror of life. Light dissipates the darkness. It also speaks of duality- the fragility of life, yet invincible it is with what we make of it.
Well done!
Cheers,
DJ
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
