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Sunset

Orange sunset melts into water.

7 total reviews 
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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Congratulations! Exceptional presentstion
It proves the presentation of a writing is important. It can make or break an entry.
It is like the design of a bookcover for a novel.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Thank you.
reply by Bonnie Seach on 30-Jun-2021
    ✋👆👍🏻👌😊🌹
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Congrats on your prize Harry! Not surprised! The orange sherbet imagery is ingeniously whimsical--fine work in a 2-4-2. Glad I caught up to this. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
    Appreciate your encouraging words, I always like my orange sherbet a little drippy.
Comment from dragonpoet
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What a beaautiful piece of artwork of sunset over water. It is an imaginative and fitting metaphor.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
    Thank you so much for the encouraging feedback. Much appreciated.
reply by dragonpoet on 30-Jun-2021
    Don't mention it, Harry.
    Joan
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Harry,

I love this poem. Your words just drip off the page :-)

Your entry for the 2-4-2 poem was lovely and congratulations on your win.

Well deserved!

Always,
Senyai

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
    Thank you so much for the encouraging feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from robyn corum
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Harry,

OOooOOOooooo... Wowzer. What an impactful and powerful use of eight syllables. *smile* And, I'll admit, that image ain't hurting things neither. What a fun presentation. I enjoyed every smakerel. This was delish!

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    I like my orange sherbet when it is melting. Thanks for the read and ecouraging feedback.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Oh, I wish I had a six for it! This was brilliant. You packed volumes in these 3 lines. Stunning presentation,

Great creative imagery and visuals. Good luck in the contest - I may be looking at a winner!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    Thanks for your read and encouraging feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Exceptional
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Yep Harry, this is my favorite poem style: vivid artwork combined with succinct wording. One can almost taste that sherbet melting. Good color scheme too. Coincidental that this (orange) post appeared on today's eclipse event!

Mark

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    Thank you, again.