A Handmade Sign
Doesn't tell their story8 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Me too! I don't understand how our governments can be so cold-hearted as to not address this dire situation. I was pleased to see some buildings here in Toronto have been built for just that purpose, but still not adequately solved. I see in the USA they are housing the illegal immigrants in hotels, yet they are blind to the homeless chaos on their streets. Global warming doesn't compare to the suffering of the homeless, yet that is all they talk about. SOMEONE HAS TO DO SOMETHING.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Me too! I don't understand how our governments can be so cold-hearted as to not address this dire situation. I was pleased to see some buildings here in Toronto have been built for just that purpose, but still not adequately solved. I see in the USA they are housing the illegal immigrants in hotels, yet they are blind to the homeless chaos on their streets. Global warming doesn't compare to the suffering of the homeless, yet that is all they talk about. SOMEONE HAS TO DO SOMETHING.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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You are so right! What a smart lady you are. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from equestrik
There is a great deal of truth here as well as a great deal to ponder. Your poem is well written and your picture choice is a perfect one for your writing.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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There is a great deal of truth here as well as a great deal to ponder. Your poem is well written and your picture choice is a perfect one for your writing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem and for your thoughtful comments. :)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely poem for the contest, and I enjoyed it because it is filled with compassion, and the willingness to understand and help. The line you chose to repeat is like the constant prodding of your conscience. I found it to be well expressed and thoughtfully written, so best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is a lovely poem for the contest, and I enjoyed it because it is filled with compassion, and the willingness to understand and help. The line you chose to repeat is like the constant prodding of your conscience. I found it to be well expressed and thoughtfully written, so best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it means a lot to me that you took time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There are so many homeless people around now, and half the time it's not even their fault. I wonder how many have lost everything due to the Covid virus. I thought your poem was brilliant. The sign 'Anything Helps' really is profound. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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There are so many homeless people around now, and half the time it's not even their fault. I wonder how many have lost everything due to the Covid virus. I thought your poem was brilliant. The sign 'Anything Helps' really is profound. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a meticulously written poem that reminds us that every homeless person has a backstory, and every history is different. When you have nothing, it is true that anything helps. It is a sad commentary on our cities that they have failed so miserably in providing true help to desperate people.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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This is a meticulously written poem that reminds us that every homeless person has a backstory, and every history is different. When you have nothing, it is true that anything helps. It is a sad commentary on our cities that they have failed so miserably in providing true help to desperate people.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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We have a lot of homeless people in our small city, it's very heartbreaking. Thank you for reviewing my poem. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
You did something kind for someone who may have had an addiction or a mental problem...we never know and most certainly should not judge! This is a lovely poem with a great message for all of us. Our spare change can help someone...
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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You did something kind for someone who may have had an addiction or a mental problem...we never know and most certainly should not judge! This is a lovely poem with a great message for all of us. Our spare change can help someone...
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this great review and your kind words...it's very appreciated. :)
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You are most welcome!!
Comment from Aussie
The amount of homeless and street people in the States amazes me. In such an affluent country. Your poem showed your inner feelings for the woman. Some actually know no other kind of life and wouldn't change it. Others fall heavily down on their luck. Well done and best wishes in the contest. K XX
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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The amount of homeless and street people in the States amazes me. In such an affluent country. Your poem showed your inner feelings for the woman. Some actually know no other kind of life and wouldn't change it. Others fall heavily down on their luck. Well done and best wishes in the contest. K XX
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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It's a growing concern for this country I'm afraid....and one that seems insurmountable. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery author. Your words plus picture make a profound statement. Your lines and words read well with stark imagery. The repeated line fits in seamlessly. I agree that homelessness is a problem that seems out of control.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery author. Your words plus picture make a profound statement. Your lines and words read well with stark imagery. The repeated line fits in seamlessly. I agree that homelessness is a problem that seems out of control.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
