Morning Dew
The sparkle of dew on our lawn provides a majestic picture.3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Love this! I enjoy taking pictures of the dew. Well written and tells a good story!
Love the graphic and you are spot on with the syllable count! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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Love this! I enjoy taking pictures of the dew. Well written and tells a good story!
Love the graphic and you are spot on with the syllable count! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Morning Dew, has the right set up and takes the readers to ground level to see the lawn supporting the diamonds of water that the daylight forms.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This 5-7-5, Morning Dew, has the right set up and takes the readers to ground level to see the lawn supporting the diamonds of water that the daylight forms.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the feedback.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
A pleasant poem and compliant with syllable requirement.
Suggestion :
>drops of crystal dew
awakens>
Grammar needs correcting
Should be
*drops... Awaken...*
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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A pleasant poem and compliant with syllable requirement.
Suggestion :
>drops of crystal dew
awakens>
Grammar needs correcting
Should be
*drops... Awaken...*
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Have corrected, thank you for the feedback.