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Cloud Pictures

On a perfect day, a front row seat -

35 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Beautifully described! Enjoyed your artistic expression of seeing pictures in the clouds and all the ways the light and colors play in the mist. Congratulations on your well deserved win!!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Hi Ivenochka,

    Thank you thank you! I was so surprised by my win. I never thought I would for there were so many beautiful poems written.

    Your kind words and super review and congratulations are humbly appreciated beyond measure!

    Have a great week, Ivenochka,
    Senyai
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Hi Ivenochka,

    Thank you thank you! I was so surprised by my win. I never thought I would for there were so many beautiful poems written.

    Your kind words and super review and congratulations are humbly appreciated beyond measure!

    Have a great week, Ivenochka,
    Senyai
reply by lyenochka on 04-Jul-2021
    You're very welcome! I think most poets are nephophiles (lovers of clouds) so we could all relate to your poem!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
    Thank you! ❤️
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Congratulations on this stunning piece.
I remember you said you liked stream of consciousness poems and this is a stunning one!
I'd quote some favorite lines but there are so many.
Beautiful descriptors and well paced.
Great job!
Katiemae

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Hi Katiemae,

    Oh thank you so very much for your generous and super review and kind words on my Acrostic. I am so surprised I won, speechless actually. I had forgotten I had written it lol. I still can?t believe it.

    I got home from watching the 4th?s fireworks on the 3rd 🙄 and settled into my caftan and some tea before bed and thought I?d read my FanStory messages for any new poems posted, when I saw it. You?d think I?d struck gold or something. It is an honor ?

    Thanks again, Katiemae :-)
    Have a great 4th!
    Senyai
Comment from Contests

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Hi Contest Committee,

    Thank you again! I am still so overwhelmed by this honor! I had absolutely no idea ?

    I?m speechless. I humbly thank you ❤️
    Senyai :-)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Glorious. This may well be a winner--rich in stunning imagery--brilliant work in acrostic form--flows gracefully--not forced--ingenious word pictures!


pallets=>palettes

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi Elizabeth,

    You are the first person to catch my mistake with ?color pallets? instead or ?color palettes?!

    I am forever indebted to you. I should have caught that myself :-(. I knew better, lol.

    Thanks for being so perceptive and for writing such a glorious review.
    Your diligence is quite appreciated!

    Have a wonderful rest of your week,
    Senyai
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 01-Jul-2021
    You made my day! Thanks again for the nomination!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    You?re very welcome, Elizabeth
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Senyai:

First, what a magnificent picture you have chosen to enhance your acrostic poem, Cloud Pictures. Your readers should be able to picture a beautiful cloud scene from the very descriptive words you've used in this poem. Good luck in the contest.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi Rdfrdmom2,
    Thanks so much for your kind comments and a super review on my little acrostic poem. Also I appreciate the well wishes!

    Always,
    Senyai
Comment from Janet Foor
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A beautiful photograph to accompany your beautiful acrostic poem. I traveled yesterday and I should have stopped to take a picture. The clouds you so eloquently describe in your poem, were like the vision in my car window.

I enjoyed reading. Well done.

Blessings
janet

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi Janet,

    Oh, you cloud gazed at some beautiful cumulus clouds? I love those too. To a fellow cloud gazer, I dedicate my acrostic poem, lol!

    Thank you so much for an enjoyable and perceptive review. I appreciate your time to read my work.

    Always,
    Senyai
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi Janet,

    Oh, you cloud gazed at some beautiful cumulus clouds? I love those too. To a fellow cloud gazer, I dedicate my acrostic poem, lol!

    Thank you so much for an enjoyable and perceptive review. I appreciate your time to read my work.

    Always,
    Senyai
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a wonderful acrostic poem. The reason being you develop the "thesis" of the poem at an appropriate pace for the subject using just the right touch of literary devices to bring this free verse into clear view.

Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi Gloria,

    Oh thank you for noticing my building up throughout my acrostic. Kinda like the building cumulus lol ?

    Again thank you, dear Gloria. I always enjoy your perceptive and knowledgeable reviews and critiques. Means so much and I consider them valuable.

    Have a great rest of tour week!

    Senyai
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi Gloria,

    Oh thank you for noticing my building up throughout my acrostic. Kinda like the building cumulus lol ?

    Again thank you, dear Gloria. I always enjoy your perceptive and knowledgeable reviews and critiques. Means so much and I consider them valuable.

    Have a great rest of tour week!

    Senyai
Comment from estory
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Nice job fitting into the acrostic, the long, languid lines smoothed out and softened the mood, and you had plenty of colorful images here of rainbow clouds drifting off in this vast expanse of possibilities, much like dreams. I like how you ended up with the word 'gifts'. estory

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi EStory,

    I appreciate your perceptive and interesting review. Interesting comments as well ? reviews like these are such a treat!

    Thank you!

    Have a great rest of your week.
    Senyai
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi EStory,

    I appreciate your perceptive and interesting review. Interesting comments as well ? reviews like these are such a treat!

    Thank you!

    Have a great rest of your week.
    Senyai
Comment from papa55mike
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There is so much beauty that many people never slow down enough to see. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is amazing.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi Papa55Mike,

    Thank you for a super review and comments. I appreciate your time to read and critique my acrostic entry.

    Have a great rest of your week!
    Senyai
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi Papa55Mike,

    Thank you for a super review and comments. I appreciate your time to read and critique my acrostic entry.

    Have a great rest of your week!
    Senyai
Comment from harmony13
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A lovely description of the clouds! The author's words are engaging,
interesting, colorful and creative. I pondered on these words as I often
like to look and guess the symbolism in the clouds! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect! Have a great day!....Maria

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
    Hi Maria,

    Oh thank you for such a sweet and perceptive review and comments!

    I appreciate your time to read and critique my little acrostic! To a fellow cloud gazer, I do love cumulus as they make excellent cloud pictures ?

    Again your time a appreciated to read and comment on my little poem.

    Always,
    Senyai

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
    Hi Maria,

    Oh thank you for such a sweet and perceptive review and comments!

    I appreciate your time to read and critique my little acrostic! To a fellow cloud gazer, I do love cumulus as they make excellent cloud pictures ?

    Again your time a appreciated to read and comment on my little poem.

    Always,
    Senyai