Just Reach Out
A Nana's Love Never Leaves.....6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write and quite chilling too, a short sharp story of life and death, I wish you luck with the contest, this brings a tear to the eye, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2021
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This is a sad write and quite chilling too, a short sharp story of life and death, I wish you luck with the contest, this brings a tear to the eye, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2021
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Thanks for reading my flash fiction contest entry. I appreciate your kind words. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree. Most 'Nanas' are always in reach somehow--in real life or in spirit. I like the two colors of font used. You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The image is a great pairing though your words paint their own. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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I agree. Most 'Nanas' are always in reach somehow--in real life or in spirit. I like the two colors of font used. You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The image is a great pairing though your words paint their own. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your kindness and thoughts on my contest entry. I appreciate it very much. have a great day!
Comment from Wendy G
That is a powerful short story - and a fine image to accompany it. your story is filled with drama, and a startling conclusion. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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That is a powerful short story - and a fine image to accompany it. your story is filled with drama, and a startling conclusion. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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thank you so much for taking the time to read, enjoy and comment on my contest entry. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from Pantygynt
A fine piece of flash fiction in exactly one hundred words. You caught the feeling of the storm in the bulk of the write and then came the creepy bit along with Nana at the end.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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A fine piece of flash fiction in exactly one hundred words. You caught the feeling of the storm in the bulk of the write and then came the creepy bit along with Nana at the end.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you...I appreciate your kindness and taking the time to read my contest entry. It's difficult to put a lot of emotion in 100 words. Thanks again.
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Goods luck in the contest.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great contest entry. I tell you, all of the 100 word stories for this competition have been superb, including yours, which is heart wrenching and poignant. well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Great contest entry. I tell you, all of the 100 word stories for this competition have been superb, including yours, which is heart wrenching and poignant. well done and good luck.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for the kind review and compliments. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Have a great day!
Comment from Leann DS
I like this a lot. I think you made good use of your 100 words in order to tell a complete and interesting story. Your descriptions clearly illustrated Sarah's fear, and I really like the ending. Thank you for sharing this. Have a great week. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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I like this a lot. I think you made good use of your 100 words in order to tell a complete and interesting story. Your descriptions clearly illustrated Sarah's fear, and I really like the ending. Thank you for sharing this. Have a great week. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and thoughts. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read this short contest entry. Have a great week and returning the hugs to you as well.
