The Apple Picker
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Comment from LisaMay
This is an excellent moral tale for children, told most engagingly in your well-structured poem. The world needs more people like Kevin. (And possibly more reciprocating strangers with such a lucrative seed!)
The line "Did I mention his name was Kevin?" is a clever way to get the heaven rhyme in. It made me laugh.
Comment: then he said, "Sir, I impore." - I assume you mean implore?
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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This is an excellent moral tale for children, told most engagingly in your well-structured poem. The world needs more people like Kevin. (And possibly more reciprocating strangers with such a lucrative seed!)
The line "Did I mention his name was Kevin?" is a clever way to get the heaven rhyme in. It made me laugh.
Comment: then he said, "Sir, I impore." - I assume you mean implore?
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for the correction. I really appreciate it. :)
