Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Love this author. There truly is nothing more relaxing than a warm summer's breeze rustling the leaves. It truly is a sound, and sense that cannot be encapsulated by anything else.

Wishing you much luck in the booths. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Gloria! :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A very beautiful image of serenity, which supports your gentle and lyrical poem. Everything sounds soft (Whisper) and gentle and caring (lullabies). Good wishes for your entry.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thank you Wendy!! :)

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Exceptional

This poem really appealed to my heart. Very well done with only 8 perfect words and a great picture. Also I experienced this poem without understand that I had as a child in bed beside an open window. Thanks

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thank you so very much!! I am glad it resonated with you. I also had a bed by an open window and it still thrills me to remember the breezes.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a great entry in this eight word contest. A rather haunting narrative in this quite challenging contest. Even more challenging than the Japanese forms, but you've done a great job, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Roy! :)

reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2021

Most welcome

reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2021

My privilege

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is just lovely. It reminds me of a song by Seals and Crofts. You painted a lovely picture in super short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, sweet Sally! :)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes, that sound is very soothing and relaxing, your words and artwork combine perfectly as you describe this scene, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Kym! :)

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Kym! :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Your very short poem describes a summer evening most of us can appreciate, when the "night breezes whisper lullabies" through the trees. Right now our breezes are much too warm and humid. Rod

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

So sorry you are having a heat wave, Rod. Thanks so much! :)

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

So sorry you are having a heat wave, Rod. Thanks so much! :)

Comment from Supe

Excellent

I'm always amazed at what can come across in a poem in only a few short words. Love the presentation on this as well. Good luck in the contest. This is a strong contender I think.


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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much!! :)

reply by Supe on 29-Jun-2021

boy, that was fast. You are very welcome.

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Haha? I have had coffee this afternoon and I AM caffeinated. LOL. :)