What Does It Mean?
This Crazy Dream8 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
I am afraid I am not able to analyse your dream .but I too have recurrent dreams on the same theme .I dream i am writing an examination and that my fingers don't move . and I am able to write..or sometimes I am walking and My legs refuse to move...
I think that you are only afraid that you may have an enemy ...
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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I am afraid I am not able to analyse your dream .but I too have recurrent dreams on the same theme .I dream i am writing an examination and that my fingers don't move . and I am able to write..or sometimes I am walking and My legs refuse to move...
I think that you are only afraid that you may have an enemy ...
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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That could be...or maybe the enemy is myself. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderfully intriguing read, when is running away from themselves it is very hard to see, you need to reach higher for your needs to be obtained and satisfied, an excellent poem and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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What a wonderfully intriguing read, when is running away from themselves it is very hard to see, you need to reach higher for your needs to be obtained and satisfied, an excellent poem and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review. It's very appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Love this poem! This felt ike a very intimate thing to share as it's a dream that has been bothering you for some time. Thank you for sharing this with us
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Love this poem! This felt ike a very intimate thing to share as it's a dream that has been bothering you for some time. Thank you for sharing this with us
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The poem is interesting for its theme. The accompanying picture adds to the urgency of its request... "Explain... I implore." Because of its intense nature I would suggest streamlining the flow of the sentences by shortening them. This can be done by leaving out unnecessary prepositions.
Best wishes. Kind regards
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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The poem is interesting for its theme. The accompanying picture adds to the urgency of its request... "Explain... I implore." Because of its intense nature I would suggest streamlining the flow of the sentences by shortening them. This can be done by leaving out unnecessary prepositions.
Best wishes. Kind regards
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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I'll look it over, thank you for the suggestion and for this nice review. :)
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How nice to receive your agreeable response. I hope you understand what I was trying to say. With the intensity of your poem, you can increase the pace by shortening sentences. For example: the man lay bleeding on the floor and he could hardly breathe X. Or: The man was bleeding. He could not breathe! Which sounds urgent? It's obvious isn't it?
Comment from Lana Marie
This is great entry for the "life is but a dream" contest. I love all the rhyming throughout the whole thing in there mental picture that you give along with the visual viral case gif. You should do well in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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This is great entry for the "life is but a dream" contest. I love all the rhyming throughout the whole thing in there mental picture that you give along with the visual viral case gif. You should do well in the contest
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from blondie560
I've had a reoccurring dream over the years too. It's always nighttime and I can't finish mail route on time. I have to go back to the office to punch out, but I keep the mail in my car because I'm going to finish on my own time in the dark. Which obviously is against all rules and I would be fired if I indeed do that. At the same time I need to make a wedding cake and deliver it too, but I haven't even started to bake it. Perhaps your dream could mean the same as I was told mine did. My therapist said that whenever I was having this dream I needed to look at my life and determine if I was under more stress than normal. She said that in my dream I'm juggling too much with time running out. Maybe your dream could be that you feel like some things have gotten out of hand. It's not a person chasing you per se, but maybe it's too many things to do and not enough time to do them. Maybe the next time you have the dream think about what's going on in your life. Are you juggling too many things at a time. Does someone have you under a time deadline on some project that you fear may not be finished in time? Just my thoughts. I do know that I stopped having the dream on a regular basis after I left the post office. Every now and then I'll have it now, so then I know I need to remember "me" time.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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I've had a reoccurring dream over the years too. It's always nighttime and I can't finish mail route on time. I have to go back to the office to punch out, but I keep the mail in my car because I'm going to finish on my own time in the dark. Which obviously is against all rules and I would be fired if I indeed do that. At the same time I need to make a wedding cake and deliver it too, but I haven't even started to bake it. Perhaps your dream could mean the same as I was told mine did. My therapist said that whenever I was having this dream I needed to look at my life and determine if I was under more stress than normal. She said that in my dream I'm juggling too much with time running out. Maybe your dream could be that you feel like some things have gotten out of hand. It's not a person chasing you per se, but maybe it's too many things to do and not enough time to do them. Maybe the next time you have the dream think about what's going on in your life. Are you juggling too many things at a time. Does someone have you under a time deadline on some project that you fear may not be finished in time? Just my thoughts. I do know that I stopped having the dream on a regular basis after I left the post office. Every now and then I'll have it now, so then I know I need to remember "me" time.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Wow! That's really amazing. You could be right, I've been under a lot of stress lately so that could account for it. I wonder now if that was the case when I was younger as well, because I was bullied as a child in school. You might be on to something. Thanks so much for this great review and for sharing your experience.....I think it helps. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know that dream and I am forever striving to move forward in all my dreams and I wonder what it all means, a poignant write here and I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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I know that dream and I am forever striving to move forward in all my dreams and I wonder what it all means, a poignant write here and I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reading my poem and for sharing your thoughts. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
A good poem for this contest. It's strange how we dream the same things over and over, and most times we are not able to figure out why. I guess there could be many interpretations but who knows exactly what they mean.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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A good poem for this contest. It's strange how we dream the same things over and over, and most times we are not able to figure out why. I guess there could be many interpretations but who knows exactly what they mean.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reading my poem and for your nice review. :)
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You are welcomed
