Hideaway
5-7-5 romantic poem8 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
Love this poem. Sp perfectly said and so romantic too.
It's a great fit for the writing prompt and I am sure you had a lot of positive feedback for this lovely piece.
The photo is exactly the way I would have pictured your words to flow.
Enjoyed this very much.
Marie
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
Love this poem. Sp perfectly said and so romantic too.
It's a great fit for the writing prompt and I am sure you had a lot of positive feedback for this lovely piece.
The photo is exactly the way I would have pictured your words to flow.
Enjoyed this very much.
Marie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Marie. Thanks so much!!!
Melissa
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Hello Marie. Thanks so much!!!
Melissa
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed how your poem conveys the romance of the privacy of a world where being in each other's company is enough. The rest of the world with all its cares and trouble doesn't matter. A table set for two is the perfect accompaniment.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
I enjoyed how your poem conveys the romance of the privacy of a world where being in each other's company is enough. The rest of the world with all its cares and trouble doesn't matter. A table set for two is the perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Lisa!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I am never quite sure what I want as my topic when writing a 5-7-5, but this works beautifully. I think that a world meant only for two would give my OWN life new meaning at this point!!! (LOL)
Call me "weary"... of a whole lotta lockdown, for one thing. *grin*
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
I am never quite sure what I want as my topic when writing a 5-7-5, but this works beautifully. I think that a world meant only for two would give my OWN life new meaning at this point!!! (LOL)
Call me "weary"... of a whole lotta lockdown, for one thing. *grin*
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Hi there Dawn, Good morning. So good to see you here and get your thoughts on this verse. Thanks so much! :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Getaway for two where the cruelty of the world can't reach - what a beautiful concept of self-preservation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
Getaway for two where the cruelty of the world can't reach - what a beautiful concept of self-preservation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from RodG
Now this is my idea of true romance--wanting to take that special someone to a hide-away where you can be alone "in a world only meant for two." Let's hope the Speaker's audience feels the same way. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
Now this is my idea of true romance--wanting to take that special someone to a hide-away where you can be alone "in a world only meant for two." Let's hope the Speaker's audience feels the same way. Rod
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Rod!
Comment from Lana Marie
That's a beautiful photo! It does have a flare of romance with the table setting and scenery.
I would definitely feel the mood if I were there. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
That's a beautiful photo! It does have a flare of romance with the table setting and scenery.
I would definitely feel the mood if I were there. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much! :)
Comment from kahpot
Everybody must love these romantic getaways, your photo would relate to many, an excellent 5-7-5 very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
Everybody must love these romantic getaways, your photo would relate to many, an excellent 5-7-5 very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Kym!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This looks like a wonderful romantic setting and you created a fine atmospheric 5-7-5 here, much enjoyed and I just want to throw myself into this scene, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
This looks like a wonderful romantic setting and you created a fine atmospheric 5-7-5 here, much enjoyed and I just want to throw myself into this scene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much Dolly!