In My Darkest Hour
A path is opened -44 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
There is a good feeling in your words, We can have faith in our darkest hour which leads us out of our sorrow. Excellent use of words that create a faith based poem. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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There is a good feeling in your words, We can have faith in our darkest hour which leads us out of our sorrow. Excellent use of words that create a faith based poem. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Mermaids,
Thank you for your grand review and for your true and interesting thoughts.
Always good hearing from you!
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Mermaids,
Thank you for your grand review and for your true and interesting thoughts.
Always good hearing from you!
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
In My Darkest Hour
by Senyai
Congratulations on your
5-7-5 Faith Contest Winning. I can see why. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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In My Darkest Hour
by Senyai
Congratulations on your
5-7-5 Faith Contest Winning. I can see why. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hey Gypsy,
Good to hear from you! Thank you so much for your interesting comments.
I am again so surprised by my win. I am not a lucky winner of anything, so this is a bit overwhelming lol.
Have a great week, Gypsy :-)
Senyai
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Hey Gypsy,
Good to hear from you! Thank you so much for your interesting comments.
I am again so surprised by my win. I am not a lucky winner of anything, so this is a bit overwhelming lol.
Have a great week, Gypsy :-)
Senyai
Comment from Ritasher
I like the unusual word you have chosen to define what the faith does to you! I think you have written it very creatively considering the topic and short syllable count. Indeed, we have our faith tested during our darkest times...
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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I like the unusual word you have chosen to define what the faith does to you! I think you have written it very creatively considering the topic and short syllable count. Indeed, we have our faith tested during our darkest times...
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Ritasher,
I appreciate your time to review my poem. Thanks so much for your kind words and thoughts!
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Ritasher,
I appreciate your time to review my poem. Thanks so much for your kind words and thoughts!
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment from Boogienights
A well deserved win, I enjoy this declaration of faith. It must be comforting to have such complete faith in the lord as to help you through the worst times. Congratulations on your win. :)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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A well deserved win, I enjoy this declaration of faith. It must be comforting to have such complete faith in the lord as to help you through the worst times. Congratulations on your win. :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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His Boogienights,
Thank you very much for your generous review and kind works on my little poem. Your time is appreciated!
Have a great week:-)
Senyai
Always,
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His Boogienights,
Thank you very much for your generous review and kind works on my little poem. Your time is appreciated!
Have a great week:-)
Senyai
Always,
Comment from karenina
Very succinct 5-7-5. How true. Nice to be reminded that even when we are besieged with doubt, our God does not leave our side. Even in the "darkest hour" He calls us to the light! --Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Very succinct 5-7-5. How true. Nice to be reminded that even when we are besieged with doubt, our God does not leave our side. Even in the "darkest hour" He calls us to the light! --Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hey Karenina,
Good to hear from you! Yes, I am again surprised by this win. I never win anything, never. So these wins back to back is a bit overwhelming lol.
Have a great week!
Take care,
Senyai
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Hey Karenina,
Good to hear from you! Yes, I am again surprised by this win. I never win anything, never. So these wins back to back is a bit overwhelming lol.
Have a great week!
Take care,
Senyai
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Sometimes it happens like that! I'm tickled to see you get he recognition you so deserve!--Karenina
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Thanks, my friend. You are the best!
Have a great week :-)
Comment from Eternal Muse
First, let me congratulate you on a very deserved win. This was a wonderful poem about faith. You fit volumes in these three lines. Great imagery and visuals and I love your artistic presentation. A wonderful message here - that faith can sometimes find you in a dark hour of despair and doubt - and wrap you up in its magical cloak.
Beautifully done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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First, let me congratulate you on a very deserved win. This was a wonderful poem about faith. You fit volumes in these three lines. Great imagery and visuals and I love your artistic presentation. A wonderful message here - that faith can sometimes find you in a dark hour of despair and doubt - and wrap you up in its magical cloak.
Beautifully done.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Eternal Muse,
A most lovely review and such kind words! Thank you so much for your time to read my little poem. Your beautifully expressive thoughts are so welcome.
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Eternal Muse,
A most lovely review and such kind words! Thank you so much for your time to read my little poem. Your beautifully expressive thoughts are so welcome.
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As your contest entry states, God does seem to reach out to us at our darkest hour. It's our choice to accept His help or not. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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As your contest entry states, God does seem to reach out to us at our darkest hour. It's our choice to accept His help or not. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Barbara,
Thank you so much for such an astute review and thoughts! I appreciate your well wishes too :-)
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Barbara,
Thank you so much for such an astute review and thoughts! I appreciate your well wishes too :-)
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment from dragonpoet
Senyai,
You answered the prompt weill. This poem tells us how faith comes in to give us strength even when we don't expect it.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Senyai,
You answered the prompt weill. This poem tells us how faith comes in to give us strength even when we don't expect it.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Joan,
I appreciate such a sweet review and thoughts. You are too kind. Thank you very much for your time to reflect on my work :-)
Have a great week and keep healthy as well,
Senyai
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Hi Joan,
I appreciate such a sweet review and thoughts. You are too kind. Thank you very much for your time to reflect on my work :-)
Have a great week and keep healthy as well,
Senyai
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You're very welcome, Senyai.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It is generally the case that when we feel at our lowest ebb, we test our faith and come out smiling. I really liked this little 5-7-5 poem, it draws on us to bring out the inner thoughts of us all. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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It is generally the case that when we feel at our lowest ebb, we test our faith and come out smiling. I really liked this little 5-7-5 poem, it draws on us to bring out the inner thoughts of us all. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Sandra,
Oh thank you for a lovely review and comments on my little poem. You?re right because it usually takes us kicking and screaming to ask for help :-)
I appreciate your thoughts so much!
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Sandra,
Oh thank you for a lovely review and comments on my little poem. You?re right because it usually takes us kicking and screaming to ask for help :-)
I appreciate your thoughts so much!
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Sometimes I see another Christian bravely going through something horrendous, and I wonder if I would be able to handle the situation so well. I must remember that God gives us what we need WHEN we need it. Your wonderful poem conveys a powerful, uplifting message!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Sometimes I see another Christian bravely going through something horrendous, and I wonder if I would be able to handle the situation so well. I must remember that God gives us what we need WHEN we need it. Your wonderful poem conveys a powerful, uplifting message!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Hi Janice,
Oh my! Your thoughts could be my own. You are so right, faith is a gift and we need to wait for what we need to be given to us (like you so eloquently spoke) WHEN we need it. Sometimes that is the hardest part :-)
Thank you for your gift of six. Made my day!
Have a great week,
Senyai
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Hi Janice,
Oh my! Your thoughts could be my own. You are so right, faith is a gift and we need to wait for what we need to be given to us (like you so eloquently spoke) WHEN we need it. Sometimes that is the hardest part :-)
Thank you for your gift of six. Made my day!
Have a great week,
Senyai
