Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

A suspense filled one line story.

Leaves the reader opportunity to ponder just what was the conflict and what happens next.

Well composed and presented.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021

Thank you, I really appreciate this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

Um... there might be a better way to resolve a conflict, but it seems to be too late for that, now. It seems that you have indeed summed it all up in one sentence. You also chose a great image to illustrate your point. Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021

Thanks for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 12-Jul-2021

You're very welcome, boogienights. May God bless you. Love, Mary Kay xoxo

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

BoogieNights,

You've written an excellent one line story. It is clear what has happened and all points are resolved.
Excellent story.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Thank you so much for this great review. :)

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 09-Jul-2021

You?re welcome.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 09-Jul-2021

You?re welcome, BN.
Cindy

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Hello poet!
Excellent 1 line poem.
I like the opening...
The conflict resolved,
I thought maybe to take a hint from the example and do something like this...
The conflict resolved, he wiped the blood from the knife, wiping it from his mind.
Just a suggestion.
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021

Thanks for reading my poem and for your great suggestion...both are appreciated. :)

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

This poem fits the contest requirements
It is graphically violent.
The appearance of the poem is vivid and and descriptive. The text stands out on the black background.
Best wishes

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021

Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your input very much as I've never written one like this before. Have a wonderful day. :)

reply by Bonnie Seach on 08-Jul-2021

Thanks for responding. This poem is so skilfully done. I'd like to read another one soon. Perhaps on a calmer theme👆😉😊💐

Comment from Jarvis Popovich

Excellent

Brilliant! I felt it, and for a story one line poem it hits the mark. Good choice. I'll bet you'll do well in the contest.

Thanks for sharing. All the best!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021

Thank you, that means a lot to me. I've never written anything like this before, so your encouraging words mean the world to me. :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Many mysteries spend pages setting up this murder scene and you captured the motive, opportunity and weapon used all in a single line. Well done! Rod

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Thanks for this positive review. I've never written one of these, so I wasn't sure about it. Your kind review made my day. :)

reply by RodG on 07-Jul-2021

My pleasure.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Mystery Author, Your one line story really is dramatic and vivid!!! Great job. I would mention that any time a contest lists it as a one liner, the entire piece needs to fit on one line, not just one sentence. I was dinged once and had to reformat mine... just a thought. Great job on this piece.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Thank you for this great review and the heads up on the formatting of the poem. I think I fixed it. Have a wonderful day. :)