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Minute Poem contest entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Excellent
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Many readers will identify with the image you are describing in the poem. It is a bit of a cautionary tale about age. The reader is invited to project their experience into this. Some of us are already there, others have it to look at in whichever lens they need to,

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Lol. Thank you for the great review, Liz. Yes, many see it in different ways, that's for sure. I really the generous stars, L. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.

    Ron
Comment from Karen Estep
Excellent
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I enjoyed your writing, even though it sounds like there is a lack of confidence of some sort. However, I personally appreciate your honesty, and feel that your graphic is beautiful! Keep writing, my friend, someone needs your words today!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Karen. I was really just goofing around. I do that a lot on here. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
Exceptional
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We all appreciate a woman who can show her brains. This lady needs a cap or scarf, I think. This may be a zombie lunch cart.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
    Hahaha. Thank you for the great review and the big sixer, Bill. Yeah, she needs something covering that mess. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Possummagic
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is so accurate I wonder who this mystery author is. If we leave our work I promoted to the top we aren't generally recognised for our efforts. Add the dollars and we shoot to the top. Same poem just funded differently!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
    Haha. That's for sure. Thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Possum M. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.

    =]
reply by Possummagic on 14-Jul-2021
reply by Possummagic on 14-Jul-2021
    You are most welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
Excellent
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The lure of the member-dollar has you enthralled in this clever sixty seconds worth. This is complete with a lovely slant (erased/waste - assonant rhyme) in the first twenty seconds worth. While the 'gold as fake' pokes fun at the member-dollar prize - which I hope you win

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. Yeah, I was just in one of those silly moods. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. Have a fantastic rest of your weekend.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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This is very cute. Made me laugh. Great creativity here, with a flawlessly done Minute poem, and your picture is to die for.

I think it should do very well in the contest for its originality, good luck in the booth.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Yelena. That's all I was really going for, was for some folks to get a chuckle out of this silliness. I don't know what brought on the idea to make a picture of a woman with her brains exposed. I guess it's just because I like to challenge myself with things in my art program. I put a lot more work into the picture than in this ridiculous piece. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you got a laugh out of it. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.