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Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Old Man's Hope "
Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings

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Comment from Cat Merto
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Nicely worded minute poem about raising children growing old
Age is just a number
And every minute your in your children life
the lessons they learned
And fun memories will be etch into their lives forever
Nice photo and color theme
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments
reply by Cat Merto on 14-Jul-2021
    Your welcome
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Good entry for this minute poem contest. So wonderful that you have given your children and grandchildren many great memories. The time we spend with them has a big influence on their lives.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
reply by Anne Johnston on 13-Jul-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from DonandVicki
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Your poem made me stop and think about how fast time flys. Several of my grandchildren are in college and It seems like yesterday I was pushing them in a stroller.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Support
Comment from equestrik
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This shows such a beautiful family and I think that your write expressed a lot of love and gratitude for all of them as well as the opportunity to be a positive force in their lives.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments
Comment from mermaids
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You have a light feel and flow to your words. The image of observing children and occasionally acting like them is a great theme for a poem. There is meaning in your words.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments.