Mr. Townsend
Charlie Story contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from AliMom
Cutest re-written origin story ever. So much better than the one on the original tv show. Yours makes the ladies kick-a** from the word go. A trip down tv memory lane that is both fun and action-packed. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Cutest re-written origin story ever. So much better than the one on the original tv show. Yours makes the ladies kick-a** from the word go. A trip down tv memory lane that is both fun and action-packed. Good job.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Ali M. Yeah, I don't know what made me think of this for an idea but I just went with it. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked my silly little take on the contest. Have yourself a great night.
Ron
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very clever. The Charlie's angels twist at the end was really well done. Thought the mixture of violence and 70's references was very amusing. Great work with this piece.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Very clever. The Charlie's angels twist at the end was really well done. Thought the mixture of violence and 70's references was very amusing. Great work with this piece.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review and the generous stars, Justin. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the contest. Have a great night.
Ron
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You're welcome .
Comment from Patty Palmer
Wonderful! You get my vote. This was the most inventive story, told Charlie's Angels style. I could see the action and hear the accompanied music played during the action scenes. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Wonderful! You get my vote. This was the most inventive story, told Charlie's Angels style. I could see the action and hear the accompanied music played during the action scenes. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Patty. For some reason this idea came to mind and I just ran with it. Lol. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the contest. Thank you again.
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Ron
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You're welcome! When I read yours I knew you had to be the winner. Good luck with the contest. You got my vote.Patty
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, plenty of violence - but a very clever story. You wrote it well, building up the drama. Keeping some elements of mystery throughout. Did the girls know who Charlie was, or the contents of his briefcase? What were these contents? We'll never know!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Yes, plenty of violence - but a very clever story. You wrote it well, building up the drama. Keeping some elements of mystery throughout. Did the girls know who Charlie was, or the contents of his briefcase? What were these contents? We'll never know!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Wendy. Yeah, I wish we had more words to work with so I could fill in all the unknowns. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, W. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
Comment from Rikki66
I like this, memories, good writing. One problem I do not think that Charlie ever met the Angels. He was just an autonomous voice that gave orders and direction to Bosley.
RikkiLXVI
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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I like this, memories, good writing. One problem I do not think that Charlie ever met the Angels. He was just an autonomous voice that gave orders and direction to Bosley.
RikkiLXVI
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Rikki. Yeah, I know he never actually met the girls but this contest needed to be about Charlie so I just went this route with it. Lol.
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You are most welcome. The stars were well earned.
Rikki
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Gory, but well written, Mystery Author. I like the way it follows what many remember of the tv show. You did a great job, even with the violence--yes you warned readers. Everything fits with the focus of what Charlie's Angels did on the show though maybe not so violent. But you created a great work from your mind.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Gory, but well written, Mystery Author. I like the way it follows what many remember of the tv show. You did a great job, even with the violence--yes you warned readers. Everything fits with the focus of what Charlie's Angels did on the show though maybe not so violent. But you created a great work from your mind.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Lol. Yes, I know I went a little overboard with the violence. I never saw them go this crazy on the TV show. Haha I really appreciate the fantastic review and rating, Jan.
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Ron
Comment from equestrik
Cute write-it took me a bit to realize where this was going but you did a good job with it. It is a good write for the short story writing prompt. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Cute write-it took me a bit to realize where this was going but you did a good job with it. It is a good write for the short story writing prompt. All the best to you.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, equestrik. I'm glad you liked my little take on the contest.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
Mr. Townsend...LOL! The pic of the speaker box really sent me back. I watched quite a bit of this show when it first started. I could clearly see all three of them kicking butt in this rail car. You did quite a bit with 300 words and it flows well. Great little story with some action and a cool ending. This has my vote. Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Mr. Townsend...LOL! The pic of the speaker box really sent me back. I watched quite a bit of this show when it first started. I could clearly see all three of them kicking butt in this rail car. You did quite a bit with 300 words and it flows well. Great little story with some action and a cool ending. This has my vote. Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and big sixer, Lynda. I was wondering if anyone was going to catch where I was going just from the title. Lol. I couldn't believe how many pictures of this speaker box I found online. Yes, it took a lot of editing to finally fit most of the action in there in just 300 words. I would have liked a lot more but what can you do? Haha. I really appreciate the gracious rating and review, L. I'm glad you liked my take on the contest. I hope you have a great weekend and thank you again.
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You're welcome. Great job.
Comment from royowen
I have often wondered how Charlie's Angels obtained their name, no I know! This is an excellent entry in this writing contest. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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I have often wondered how Charlie's Angels obtained their name, no I know! This is an excellent entry in this writing contest. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked my take on the contest. Have yourself a great weekend.
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Most welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-hundred-word story, Mr. Townsend, gives the readers an exciting origin story for the trio of agents who we know as Charlie's Angels. Fun stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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This three-hundred-word story, Mr. Townsend, gives the readers an exciting origin story for the trio of agents who we know as Charlie's Angels. Fun stuff.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. Yeah, I had to try to come up with something different for the Charlie contest. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
