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Gotta Make You Wonder ?

An Epitaph

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Comment from Karen Estep
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Good job, my fellow writer! This is witty and fun, and I enjoyed reading it. Your graphic obviously fits very well also! Good luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
    Thank you so very much, it was fun to write
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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Oh dear! What goes around comes around, they say.
So the grave robber's grave got robbed.
The poem fits contest requirements
It is amusing. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you very much
reply by Bonnie Seach on 19-Jul-2021
    🤗👍👏
Comment from Patty Palmer
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LOL He was a grave robber and now here sits his open grave. It's all dug up. Does kind of make you wonder. What goes around comes around. RIP Billy where ever you are.
Patty

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you very much
reply by Patty Palmer on 19-Jul-2021
    You're welcome.
    Patty
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Well there's certainly an irony there, isn't there?

Changing tacks a little, I believe comedian and writer Spike Milligan's gravestone epitaph, which he wrote for himself before he died was "I told you I was ill!"

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
    Thank you very much
Comment from Pantygynt
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I still think the best ever of this type of thing was:

'Here lies Colonel John Smith
Accidentally shot by his batman

Well done thou good and faithful servant!'

Yours is great but it relies heavily on the picture for its impact, but I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
    Thank you very much
Comment from MAMONIA
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This is hysterical! Is Billy dead? Is he in jail? Or did someone rob his body.
This piece really makes you think. What happened here?
I enjoyed this a lot and know it is a great entry for the contest.
Wishing you loads of luck,
Marie

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
    Thank you very much
Comment from Wendy G
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Oh very well done!! This really made me laugh, and it certainly meets the requirements of being a witty epitaph! Excellent photo as well. Best wishes for this entry - I'm sure it will be a winner!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
    Many thanks, I thought it may have been to short
reply by Wendy G on 17-Jul-2021
    Sometimes short and to the point is better! You said it all!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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The picture says it all. Both wit and irony. The poem without the picture would fall flat. Nice pairing. Kudos. These quick poems can make one fast on their feet.

Good read. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
    How very true, no picture no fun, thank you very much