Comment from Vangma

Good

Life is full of temptation. One always veers towards sinful thoughts. Sin and virtue dance together in your mental frame and most of the time sin wins the prize. But with virtuous thoughts, one can defeat 'sin'. And God always helps sincere people.

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021

Thank you for the review. Since you felt it only deserved a four would it be too much to ask where I might improve it.

I visited your profile and discovered you are fairly new to the site. I welcome you and hope you will enjoy writing and reviewing.

I read a quote you posted:
Religion is an unintelligent expression of human wisdom!
I can see why you did not care for my poem. Often our visions differ.

Thank you and have a great day!

reply by Vangma on 24-Jul-2021

Thank you!