Tepid Shadows
a Naani poetic form30 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi Mystery Writer,
My, this is an excellent Naani! Very impressive use of words here that followed all the stated rules. I have never written a Naani but would like to try. Interesting form.
A great photo to accompany your well crafted verse. Quite thought provoking and conveying thoughts of bygone memories and fading thoughts that have gotten lost perhaps over the long years. Reflections on yesterdays ...
All the best in the contest with this perfect entry!
Senyai
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Hi Mystery Writer,
My, this is an excellent Naani! Very impressive use of words here that followed all the stated rules. I have never written a Naani but would like to try. Interesting form.
A great photo to accompany your well crafted verse. Quite thought provoking and conveying thoughts of bygone memories and fading thoughts that have gotten lost perhaps over the long years. Reflections on yesterdays ...
All the best in the contest with this perfect entry!
Senyai
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much!! I appreciate it , Senyai!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully crafted poem penned with great skill. Unusual subject. Powerful words accompanied by a matching photo. Good luck in the contest! But then there is no light without a shadow.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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A beautifully crafted poem penned with great skill. Unusual subject. Powerful words accompanied by a matching photo. Good luck in the contest! But then there is no light without a shadow.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much Seshadri!
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Thank you so very much Seshadri!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those stale memories that haunt us and leave us in a melancholy mood as we are drugged by the past and carry the baggage with us, a grief-filled sadness here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Those stale memories that haunt us and leave us in a melancholy mood as we are drugged by the past and carry the baggage with us, a grief-filled sadness here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Dolly!!
Comment from nomi338
Is there anything more stale and malignant that the air surrounding failed relationships, dreams that died an horrific death, or the loss of love to either physical death or the departure by any means of a love once held dear. Siting alone in a dimly lit room with the stale air of loss, is a horrible way to live or die.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Is there anything more stale and malignant that the air surrounding failed relationships, dreams that died an horrific death, or the loss of love to either physical death or the departure by any means of a love once held dear. Siting alone in a dimly lit room with the stale air of loss, is a horrible way to live or die.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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So true, Nomi. Thank you for an insightful review!!
Comment from Val Crisson
This is an excellent naani, and it is written correctly and with no rhyming. That is something people don't seem to understand about naani - there should be no rhyming. Also, excellent presentation of a human condition. Very well written. "Stale malaise" - perfect line.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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This is an excellent naani, and it is written correctly and with no rhyming. That is something people don't seem to understand about naani - there should be no rhyming. Also, excellent presentation of a human condition. Very well written. "Stale malaise" - perfect line.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Hello Val... thanks so much.
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, mystery poet. I'm so very impressed by this and the art. Just stunning with a profound aura of a sad and neglected life. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Wow, mystery poet. I'm so very impressed by this and the art. Just stunning with a profound aura of a sad and neglected life. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, sweet Sal!
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Very nice work and thanks for outlining the form! It is a form I have not encountered before and always cherish learning new things. The words paint a perfect picture of the downtrodden and those who do not put themselves forward.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Very nice work and thanks for outlining the form! It is a form I have not encountered before and always cherish learning new things. The words paint a perfect picture of the downtrodden and those who do not put themselves forward.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you Sherry!!
Comment from RGstar
A strong piece of writing, and excellent the attributes of the form. Such imagery here that give rise to circumstance, and in so many ways. Fine wording. This Naani is both poetic in content, as too giving justice to the form.
Bravo.
One of the better ones I have read. This deserves more.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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A strong piece of writing, and excellent the attributes of the form. Such imagery here that give rise to circumstance, and in so many ways. Fine wording. This Naani is both poetic in content, as too giving justice to the form.
Bravo.
One of the better ones I have read. This deserves more.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you RG!! I really appreciate your comments!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning work - a brilliantly composed verse, smooth in articulation and descriptive execution - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this gem...
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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In my opinion, a stunning work - a brilliantly composed verse, smooth in articulation and descriptive execution - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this gem...
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much Eve!
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You are so welcome - thank you for sharing - once again, best wishes in the contest...Eve
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are eerie, clear, descriptive and creative. I pondered
on the theme of these words. I also thought about the few times I felt
like this. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with
the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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The author's words are eerie, clear, descriptive and creative. I pondered
on the theme of these words. I also thought about the few times I felt
like this. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with
the words of this poem.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you Maria!!
