Firelight
Fall creates...10 total reviews
Comment from Beejay
A wonderfully presented piece of work....
You have a great talent to create in just a few words , their capability to create clarity and originality....
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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A wonderfully presented piece of work....
You have a great talent to create in just a few words , their capability to create clarity and originality....
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you do much for this wonderful review...it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Gorgeous image. Autumn is a favorite time of year; besides having "Autumn" for a girl's name, fall comes in leaps and bounds of exposure. The burst of colors will be amazing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Gorgeous image. Autumn is a favorite time of year; besides having "Autumn" for a girl's name, fall comes in leaps and bounds of exposure. The burst of colors will be amazing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Firelight, has the proper formatting and creates the mental blast of color that invites the reader into the scene.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Firelight, has the proper formatting and creates the mental blast of color that invites the reader into the scene.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
The picture caught my attention right away leading me to want to read the poem, which I did. It truly does look like the area is on fire with color. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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The picture caught my attention right away leading me to want to read the poem, which I did. It truly does look like the area is on fire with color. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you for such a nice review, I always appreciate you. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I like the expression"A landscape on fire!" -a perfect description of the brilliant reds, oranges and yellows of Autumn. It is also a nice touch to personify Autumn, as if she is painting for our pleasure. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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I like the expression"A landscape on fire!" -a perfect description of the brilliant reds, oranges and yellows of Autumn. It is also a nice touch to personify Autumn, as if she is painting for our pleasure. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Lana Marie
That's such a delightful beautiful photograph that goes along with your beautiful descriptive 5-7-5 poem. Great entry for this Ode to Autumn contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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That's such a delightful beautiful photograph that goes along with your beautiful descriptive 5-7-5 poem. Great entry for this Ode to Autumn contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Karla Bowen Herman
I think your poem does an outstanding job of reflecting Autumn. The picture choice was spot-on, as well. I enjoyed both. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your writings.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I think your poem does an outstanding job of reflecting Autumn. The picture choice was spot-on, as well. I enjoyed both. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked my poem, and I wonder if there is any way you think I could improve it? It's truly how I learn. Thanks again. :)
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I actually meant to give this one a higher rating, so I went back in and corrected it. So sorry.
Comment from AprilViolet
Autumn is my absolute favorite season its just too bad that winter comes after it! Lol. I already see the leaves starting to change. It will here soon! Wonderful poem and picture!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Autumn is my absolute favorite season its just too bad that winter comes after it! Lol. I already see the leaves starting to change. It will here soon! Wonderful poem and picture!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and good presentation.
-A very good poem with
the vivid image in line one.
-Good personification in line two
as "autumn paints, with colors warm."
-I like the reverse syntax and you
didn't say with warm colors.
-A very good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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-Very nice image
and good presentation.
-A very good poem with
the vivid image in line one.
-Good personification in line two
as "autumn paints, with colors warm."
-I like the reverse syntax and you
didn't say with warm colors.
-A very good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Susan Newell
I like the imagery of fire, followed by warmth. It contrasts the coolong weather that causes the leaves to die and turn color. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I like the imagery of fire, followed by warmth. It contrasts the coolong weather that causes the leaves to die and turn color. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
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You are welcome.
