Minnesota Summer's Eve
In Duluth, a pleasant...14 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An unusual nature poem set within a city. The rhyme scheme is good with only one near rhyme. The language is not flowery, fitting to the city setting. The poem reads well without any obvious bumps.
I have no suggestions.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
An unusual nature poem set within a city. The rhyme scheme is good with only one near rhyme. The language is not flowery, fitting to the city setting. The poem reads well without any obvious bumps.
I have no suggestions.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review....I really appreciate it. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from zanya
It's a delightful and uplifting read inviting the reader to share the visual and aromatic delights of Nature in all Her glory on a summer's evening- thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
It's a delightful and uplifting read inviting the reader to share the visual and aromatic delights of Nature in all Her glory on a summer's evening- thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
The imagery used in this poem is second to none! Sounds like a beautiful place to grow up. Those pesky tourists though! Deserving on a six star rating!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
The imagery used in this poem is second to none! Sounds like a beautiful place to grow up. Those pesky tourists though! Deserving on a six star rating!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Delightfully pleasant poem. It is light and cheerful much like the beautiful flowers in the artwork that you selected. It pairs wonderfully well with this piece. Thank you for sharing. Good job!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
Delightfully pleasant poem. It is light and cheerful much like the beautiful flowers in the artwork that you selected. It pairs wonderfully well with this piece. Thank you for sharing. Good job!
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words. :)
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You're Welcome