Comment from robyn corum

Good

Dear Mystery Writer,

Yep, this was something different than I had expected when I opened the page. *smile* It's cute and reveals the secrets mom would probably rather were kept secret. Bad child! haha

But your second line needs one more syllable. Thanks!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

This poem follows the contest requirements.
The accompanying picture fits the idea.
It reminds me of the Brighton Beach postcard humor.
Thanks for sharing
Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021

Bonnie, thanks for the review and stars. Don't know why mom is the
one every one hears poofing, dad was much more of a poofer than mom. i guess when mom poofs, it is usually an accident, dads do it
on purpose.

reply by Bonnie Seach on 31-Jul-2021

Ladies, especially moms, have better manners than dads 🤣😅😂 The more beer dads drink the greater their problem. Thanks for a good giggle😜👍🏻