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Michelangelo

One of the greatest Italian artists of the Renaissance .

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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Informative, educational and most interesting.
The author is au fait with the 'of the Author's notes space and made fill use of it.
The 2 visuals are story enhancing.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thank you for the positive feedback .. glad you found my entry interesting.

    PS: just wondering if that s a pet bird .. is it a dove perched on your head ?
reply by Bonnie Seach on 03-Aug-2021
    Please forgive typos in my review comments. Aaah, so you noticed my profile pic. Sunshine is a ring necked turtle dove. I rescued her when she was a few days old and tiny 5 years ago. She had fallen from a nest and been abandoned. Hand raising her was a nightmare but we made it! She e has her own nest and has produced several little doves just like her. She visits me every day and I chat with her and give her treats like boiled egg yolk. She cooes at me when I tell her I love her💞🤗
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
    I am so glad you were able to save Sunshine.

    I know , I read it?s no easy task to raise chicks. ( sigh)

    Also it?s such a great achievement that you were able to give her freedom back yet she has chosen to return everyday to chat and coo to you .

    it?s obvious Sunshine loves you and you care deeply for her. (hearts)

    You have a very unique bond!

    I wish you many more years of happiness together!

    Ciao!





Comment from Lana Marie
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This is a creative approach to the 100 word story. You used it to teach us something most of us didn't know. Thank You for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Glad you thought my entry offered some interesting insight.

    I found it easy to insert the given words in my narrative ..

    Thank you for the positive review!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a nice vignette covering the beginnings an different types of achievements of Michelangelo. if your aim was to make us want to learn more, you have succeeded admirably.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Thank you .. my country has much art to offer

    I just thought it would be neat to talk about it ..

    I thought this unusual approach would win some credit too .

    The contest said ?write a story ? it didn?t say it had to be fiction ?

    Glad my entry aroused your interest.

    Keep safe!