Arson
Too often these criminals get away with their crime5 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Congrats Tempeste on this win! I don't recall seeing this poem to review or vote, but my vote was unneeded in this case.
Your image - both illustration and words - combined for an excellent presentation and the reality of an arsonist, especially in the (dry) forests in the Western states of the USA, creating a disaster. Of course, I am a favorite of this short poem style even if it not my preferred 5-7-5. (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Congrats Tempeste on this win! I don't recall seeing this poem to review or vote, but my vote was unneeded in this case.
Your image - both illustration and words - combined for an excellent presentation and the reality of an arsonist, especially in the (dry) forests in the Western states of the USA, creating a disaster. Of course, I am a favorite of this short poem style even if it not my preferred 5-7-5. (-;
Mark
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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This format is my favourite too.
La Sardegna and Sicily has been burning too hence my wee poem Arson.
Sadly Most fire are lit by evil people.
I heard about the USA being on fire
to climate change of arson ??
Greece is burning too..
I came first because the theme won the interest of more members.. most of the other entries were light /funny.
Thank you for the gift of that extra star !
Ciao!
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao Master Poet: I thank you for sharing this most important message. I like it in that it reminds me of the forest fires that we recently had right here in America. We had a fire in the state of California that took lives and homes of both people and wildlife as well...throughout a large area in that state.Then there was a devastating forest fire just a few miles from where I live here in New Jersey. I don't know whether or not it was arson. But to me...it looks extremely suspicious. I posted a message about it here on FanStory for the information of the community. Hey...once again...congrats on another victory for you. You deserve it. You are a six star person...period. Golden Star of ability...naturally. God bless you, Tempeste. cordially: rhonnie69. P,S,..Red Ribbon Girl. You Impress Me.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Ciao Master Poet: I thank you for sharing this most important message. I like it in that it reminds me of the forest fires that we recently had right here in America. We had a fire in the state of California that took lives and homes of both people and wildlife as well...throughout a large area in that state.Then there was a devastating forest fire just a few miles from where I live here in New Jersey. I don't know whether or not it was arson. But to me...it looks extremely suspicious. I posted a message about it here on FanStory for the information of the community. Hey...once again...congrats on another victory for you. You deserve it. You are a six star person...period. Golden Star of ability...naturally. God bless you, Tempeste. cordially: rhonnie69. P,S,..Red Ribbon Girl. You Impress Me.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Ciao Rhonnie , I appreciate the kind words ..and the extra bright star .. I sent you a e:mail!
Take care!
Comment from Karen Estep
Great writing, especially since you stayed within the syllable count and added a rhyme factor! Your graphic fit your writing well, and your story is very true . Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Great writing, especially since you stayed within the syllable count and added a rhyme factor! Your graphic fit your writing well, and your story is very true . Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the kind review .. much appreciated.
I received 7 votes so some members found the theme of importance..and that per se is a great win!
Keep safe!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Unfortunately, you are all too true. But do you really think people intentionally start these fires? Surely not. I hope it's mostly simple stupidity. Wow. If otherwise, this world is crazy!
You may want to add an author's note that you are pronouncing 'fuel' as one syllable. Thanks!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Unfortunately, you are all too true. But do you really think people intentionally start these fires? Surely not. I hope it's mostly simple stupidity. Wow. If otherwise, this world is crazy!
You may want to add an author's note that you are pronouncing 'fuel' as one syllable. Thanks!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Sadly in the past two weeks in my country the countryside in more than one region is burning and ..without a doubt .. due to people igniting the vegetation.
Thank you for the tip .. I had no idea that fuel could be considered two syllables !
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation for the 13 syllable poem. These criminals are definitely a problem and I agree, too often they get away with their crimes. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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This is a good presentation for the 13 syllable poem. These criminals are definitely a problem and I agree, too often they get away with their crimes. Nice writing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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I appreciate the positive feedback , glad you found my entry interesting.
So much wildlife perish and flora is destroyed .. it?s such a sad situation.
