Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is a great poem. It is quite clever and often accurate. It fits the requirements. I enjoyed it. It would make a great poster! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021

I like the pic too. Thanks for the read and the encouraging comments.

Comment from NANCY V. FORREST

Good

You are right. It does pounce--but the word pounce has a typo. Otherwise the image is great and I like the homage to Sandburg as well. The photo is an intereting contrast.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

---

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Thanks for the catch, I will edit.

reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 20-Aug-2021

:-)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with a nice reference to Carl Sandburg's poem of the fog.
Great imagery and picture to match.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

---

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Thank you for the read and the feedback.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I think some winter comes like that .Since I live in a tropical country ,I have no idea of winters. I am reminded of a poem '"The fog comes on little cat's feet-- all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

---

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Winters can be brutal but also for those like snow, they can be great fun. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. I must confess Carl Sandburg's poem always rings in my head.