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Rustle

Nature 3/5/3

3 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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very few words to say so much...dry leaf's falling on the ground...crisp to the touch...blow and spread as we walk through them...playing a calming tune...

love your poem...and love the picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Thanks for and an encouraging review zanya
reply by l.raven on 09-Sep-2021
    your so very welcome...a vote not wasted...love xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with
"Rustle of dry leaf."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Great review zanya
reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Sep-2021
    You are welcome, zanya.
Comment from SHABAMO
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Good job for a very small number of syllables! I just did this one and wow, haikus are hard enough, and this is like a half haiku. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Loved the comments - tells it like it is ! zanya
reply by SHABAMO on 09-Sep-2021
    Thanks!